题目内容
【题目】Han Lei想要给笔友Jim发一封电子邮件,诉说自己有诸多家规,他很苦恼, 假如你是Han Lei,你替Han Lei完成这封电子邮件。
要求:1. 需要简单介绍家规,2.对于大多数家规表示理解并赞同。3可就以下一或两项家规提出不同看法,阐明反对原因,并写出改善方法。
2. 语句通顺,意思完整,不要逐句翻译。
词数:90词-110词。
提示:1. 不许留长发,打耳洞
2.上课日晚上不允许出去
3. 整理自己的房间
4. 每天不允许玩手机或电脑游戏
参考短语:I think I should be allowed to do… I don’t agree with…
I would like to… I could…if I…
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to tell you that I’m worrying about something.
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Yours sincerely,
Han Lei
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to tell you that I’m worrying about something. First, my parents don’t allow me to have long hair and get my ears pierced. I think I would look more beautiful if I were allowed to do that. Then, I am not allowed to hang out on school nights with my friends. Next, I have to clean up my room every day. What’s more, I'm not allowed to play mobile phones or computer games every day. They said it would waste time if I did that. But I think I could relax myself after a long period of study if I did that. I feel very distressed. I need your help and now I can’t go to sleep. Write soon.
Yours sincerely,
Han Lei
【解析】
本文是一封电子邮件,要符合书信的格式,因为是考生替Han Lei完成这封电子邮件。因此人称为第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主。所给出的材料非常详细,以要点提示作为写作的主线。我们需要做的就是用正确的语言把它们表达出来,可以主动语态与被动语态相结合,参考短语尽量使用上,写作要点一定不要遗漏,并适当发挥。恰当使用连词,使上下文连贯。