Question

【题目】Writing.（15分）

上周日你和朋友去阳光公园游玩时看到公园内的一些不文明行为。请你根据以下图画提示，为校报英语专栏写一篇报道，谈谈这些不文明行为，并呼吁大家告别不文明行为，爱护环境。

要求: 1. 根据图片内容进行写作, 可适当发挥; 2. 90个词左右。参考词汇: 胡写, 乱画scribble; 不文明的uncivilized; 草坪lawn

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Last Sunday I went to the Sun Park with my friends. The scenery was beautiful and we had a good time there. But at the same time I found some bad behavior in the park: some people scribbled on the wall; some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere. The bad behavior made the park look ugly. I think the park is a public place. It’s everyone’s duty to keep it clean. Let’s stop all uncivilized behavior to make the park more beautiful.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图画作文。根据图画可知公园中人们的一些不文明行为：在草坪上踢足球、在墙上乱写乱画、随地乱扔垃圾等。写出有关的短语和固定表达备用，最后串联起来。

【亮点说明】本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。恰当地运用了一些短语和句式，如have a good time,at the same time,make sb/sth do/形容词等。