Question

3．假如你是图片中的人物，请你根据图画内容及所给提示，完成下面的日记．字数不少于20．

June 7th        Tuesday                                                   Sunny
I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn't work．When I woke up，it was 7：10． So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast． By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9：10． I was late for class． When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home． What a bad day it was!
One possible version．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图示写一篇日记，注意日记的格式．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；7：10醒来，错过校车，迟到，作业落在家里
常用到的重点短语：
get up 起床
wake up 醒来
be late for 迟到
by the time到…时候为止
【高分句型】
1．①So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop ②without breakfast．
①so表示所以，不能和because连用．
②without除了，没有…，介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
2．①By the time I got there，I missed the school bus②because it had already gone．
①by the time到…时候为止，引导时间状语从句．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
3．①When the teacher asked for my homework．I found②I had left it at home．
①when引导的时间状语从句
②found后是省略了that的宾语从句．

解答 June 7th        Tuesday                       Sunny
   I got up late this morning．My alarm clock didn't work．When I woke up，it was 7：10． So I washed my face quickly and run to the bus stop without breakfast．【高分句型】By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone．【高分句型】So I had to walk to school．Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9：10． I was late for class． When the teacher asked for my homework．I found I had left it at home．（描述图画）【高分句型】What a bad day it was!（感想）

点评 本题实际是应用文写作，所给材料是图画较为详细，动笔前先要认真看懂图画确定写作内容，注意不能遗漏要点．根据要点内容可知要用简单句，包括主系表结构，主谓宾结构等．根据所给内容本文人称主要是第一人称，时态为一般过去时态．写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确，尤其要注意短文开头结尾日记的书写格式．