Question

13．母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报．在母亲节来临之际，请根据下列提示写一篇以"My mother"为题目的英语作文，介绍你可亲可爱的妈妈．
要点：
1．年龄，身高，发型等外貌特征．
2．个性品质（参考词汇：kind，friendly，patient，honest，get on well with…）
3．互动（I help my mom to…/she won't get angry if I…/she is happy if…）
4．感情表达（I love…and I give her…/she works so hard that I…）
要求：
1．文章必须涵盖所有内容要点，参考词汇可以选择运用．
2．此题具有开放性可以围绕语言要点适当发挥．
3．词数80词左右，开头结尾已给出不计入总字数．
My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．无论我学习上需要什么她都给我买，尽管她没有多少钱．
 whatever 引导名词性从句．even though 尽管
句型二：
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．我会攒钱买漂亮的衣服让她看起来年轻．
动词不定式表目的，make her look+形容词，使她看起来怎么样．

解答 My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．（外貌）She is friendly．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（爱好）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（互动）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（愿望）

点评 根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．