Question

4．随着近几年的快速发展，广安变得越来越美丽，大批的中外游客前来观光旅游．假设你是广安某旅游景点的一名志愿者，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，倡导游客文明旅游，生态旅游．
内容提示：1．保护环境，不乱扔垃圾；
2．遵守规章制度
3．积极主动帮助他人；
4．尽可能用英语和外宾交流．
参考词汇：throw rubbish（扔垃圾）  communicate with（与…交流）
要求：1．短文应包括所给的要点，适当发挥；
2．词数：80词左右；文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．
My dear friends，
Welcome to Guang'an，Deng Xiaoping's hometown．With the development in recent years．Guangan becomes more and more beautiful．And many visitors come here every year．We should try our best to do the following things．First，we should protect our environment．We cannot throw rubbish everywhere，and we should try to keep our city clean．
Second，we must obey all kinds of rules．And we should stop others from breaking the rules．When we see things happen like this，we can tell them that it's everyone's duty．
Third，we should be active to help others．Visitors are strange here．We can be guides for them．We should also try our best to communicate with foreigners in English so that they can understand us easily．
Are you ready？Let's act the above out．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①We should try our best to do the following things．我们应该尽力做到以下几点．句子中try one's best to do sth尽力做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式形式．
②Let's act the above out．让我们行动起来．句子中let's do sth让我们做某事，后面跟动词原形；act out行动起来．

解答 My dear friends，
Welcome to Guangan，Deng Xiaoping‘s  hometown．With the development in recent years，Guangan becomes more and more beautiful．And many visitors come here every year．We should try our best to do the following things（高分句型）．（引出话题）
First，we should protect our environment．We cannot throw rubbish everywhere，and we should try to keep our city clean．（保护环境）
Second，we must obey all kinds of rules．And we should stop others from breaking the rules．When we see things happen like this，we can tell them that it's everyone's duty．（遵守规则制度）
Third，we should be active to help others．Visitors are strange here．We can be guides for them．We should also try our best to communicate with foreigners in English so that they can understand us easily．（帮助他人，用英语和外宾交流）
Are you ready？Let's act the above out（高分句型）．（发出倡议）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．