题目内容
【题目】写作
根据下列要点写一篇100字左右的短文。
要点:
我最喜欢的季节 | 春天 |
扬州春天的气候 | 1.渐渐变暖,白天越来越长 |
2.阳光明媚 | |
扬州的春天的景象 | 1.百花齐放,百鸟争鸣 |
2.蜜蜂和蝴蝶在花丛中嬉戏 | |
扬州人们喜欢的活动 | 1.在晴朗的下午放飞色彩斑斓的风筝 |
2.在扬州的园林中散步, ...... | |
我的感受 | 扬州春天最美,参观扬州最美的季节是春天 ...... |
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括要点中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右;
【答案】
My favorite season is spring. The weather in Yangzhou is becoming warmer and warmer, and the days are getting longer and longer. The sun is shining brightly.
The flowers begin to come out and the trees begin to turn green. The birds are singing happily in the sky. You can see bees and butterflies flying around the flowers. They are playing each each. Many people like flying kites. They often fly colorful kites on a sunny afternoon they also like walking in Yangzhou garden
I think Yangzhou has the most beautiful spring, the best season to visit Yangzhou is spring. Welcome to Yangzhou.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍自己最喜欢的季节。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。要求语句通顺、意思连贯。文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚。
写作亮点:本文按照写作要求,根据汉语提示,用简洁的语言,准确地表达出汉语意思,语言流畅。本文写作思路清晰,时态运用准确,主要用一般现在时态来描述。写作层次分明,分别写出了扬州的春天的天气,景象,扬州人的爱好,最后写自己喜欢扬州春天的原因,并发出好客邀请:Welcome to Yangzhou.