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16．世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁．怎样学好英语是
我们一直在求索的问题．几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议．
要求：1．词数：80-100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2．字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰．
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us．How can we learn it well？Here are my suggestions．
First，we should often listen to the tapes，English songs and pro grams．Watching English movies is also helpful to us．Second，we should speak English in class as much as possible．Don't be afraid of making mistakes．The more you speak，the fewer mistakes you'll make．We'd better join the English club and practice with others．Third，we can read more English newspapers and magazines．It's good for us．At last，we should recite some good passages and keep diaries．
In a word，as long as we do more listening，speaking，reading and writing，we will learn English well．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①Watching English movies ②is also helpful to us．看英文电影对我们也很有帮助．
①动名词作主语，谓语动词用单数．
②be helpful to sb对某人有帮助的
高分句型二：
The more you speak，the fewer mistakes you'll make．你说的越多，你犯的错误就越少．
固定结构the+比较级，the+比较级，越…越…

解答 One possible version：
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us．How can we learn it well？Here are my suggestions．
First，we should often listen to the tapes，English songs and programs．Watching English movies is also helpful to us．【高分句型一】【听方面的建议】Second，we should speak English in class as much as possible．Don't be afraid of making mistakes．The more you speak，the fewer mistakes you'll make．【高分句型二】We'd better join the English club and practice with others．【说方面的建议】Third，we can read more English newspapers and magazines．It's good for us．【读方面的建议】At last，we should recite some good passages and keep diaries．【写方面的建议】
In a word，as long as we do more listening，speaking，reading and writing，we will learn English well．【总结全文】

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