Question

【题目】书面表达

你知道中国古代的四大发明吗？ 你认为哪项发明是最有用的？ 请阐述你的观点并详细介绍 这项发明。 词数80个左右

Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know,The Compass ,Gunpowder ,Papermaking,and Printing are our Chinese great inventions.Our ancestors created them by their own mind and hand.These inventions not only have an effect on our daily life,but also contribute to the culture all aroud world.But which is the most useful and practical invention to us?Well,as far as I concerned,the paper that we use now was first invented in Han dynasty,at that time this invention did improve their hand writing.Just imagine how our life will be if we live without paper?so,in a word,I think the paper is the most useful invention.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者就四大发明发表意见，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如hese inventions not only have an effect on our daily life,but also contribute to the culture all aroud world.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。