Question

【题目】Writing（作文）

94．Write at least 60 words on the topic“I’m ready”（以“我准备好了”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

你对明天一定有着美好的憧憬．为此，你已经做好了哪方面的准备？请结合你的经历或特长等，选取一个角度具体谈谈你是如何做准备的．

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）

independent be good at…

responsible take part in…

hardworking it helps me to…

Answer 1

【答案】I'm ready

I'm ready having prepared with effort for so many years, I'm ready for my high school. Since it would be a period for the youth to experience considerable emotional, mental and physical growth, it's important for me to prepare mentally and physically for the changes ahead. I take part in many activities and develop many hobbies. They both help me become more active and energetic than before. What's more, I have set myself up to the academic side and learnt to ignore any distraction to learning. The accumulation of all kinds of knowledge has already laid a solid foundation for my further study. In my free time, I read a lot of books, which largely broadens my horizon. I have acquired some reading skills that can help me get more information from books. Last but not least, I can arrange my time well now and I have set up my mind to make the most use of time in the high school. I am trying to make myself better and I am really ready for my high school life.

【解析】

本文为议论文。题目为“我准备好了”。写作人称主要为第一人称“我”，时态为现在完成时和一般现在时。写作要点包括：1、体能上的准备；2、思想上的准备（知识储备）；3、决心。写作举例需结合经历或特长。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

Since①it would be a period for the youth to experience considerable emotional, mental and physical growth, it’s important for me to②prepare mentally and physically for the changes ahead.

由于高中是青少年经历相当大的情感、精神以及身体变化的时期，做好思想上和体能上的准备对我来说很重要．

② 引导原因状语从句，表示显而易见的原因，语气比because弱，比as强。

②不定式为真正的主语，it在句子中作形式主语。

【高分句型二】

In my free time, I read a lot of books, which largely broadens my horizon.

在我空闲的时间里，我读很多书，这打开了我的视野。

broaden one's horizon/eyes 打开某人的视野

which引导非限制性定语从句，which 指代前面的内容，在从句中作主语。