Question

书面表达（10分）

校团委正举行“畅想未来”的征文活动， 请以“My ideal school ”为题写一篇文章，不少于80字。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。所写内容需包含以下要点，并加以适当发挥.

not far from my home, 10 minutes on foot , clean, beautiful

start at 9:00 a.m. , finish at 4:00p.m.

only four subjects, an hour of homework, all kinds of after-school activities

a big library, a swimming pool, three computer rooms

go on a trip every month

My ideal school

My ideal school is

 

 

 

 

This is my ideal school . I hope my dream can come true some day .

 

Answer 1

My ideal school

My ideal school day will start at 9:30 a.m. because I like sleeping. The school day finishes at 4:00 p.m. We will have more free time to do other things.

My ideal school is not far from my home. It takes 10 minutes to go to school on foot. The school is clean and beautiful. There is a big library. We can read any interesting books we like and have a rest in it. It's wonderful.

We only have four subjects. They are Computer Studies, English, Geography and Swimming. So we have a swimming pool and three computer rooms. We have an hour of homework, so we can do all kinds of after-school activities, such as cooking, dramatic recreation, driving, watching films, reading and singing. In addition, we go on a school trip every month. It's interesting.

This is my ideal school . I hope my dream can come true some day .

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我理想的学校。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一人称，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：be far from.....；In addition，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意本文要根据文章所列出的要点大纲逐个描述，不可遗漏。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己理想学校的距离，上课时间，主要课程安排，接下来指出学校的教学环境，最后指出想要的娱乐活动。

考点：提纲作文。