Question

【题目】

友情在我们的生活中非常重要，每个人都有各自的朋友。那么朋友间应该相同还是不同呢？下面是你和你的朋友Mary的一些信息，请根据表格进行比较，并发表对朋友间异同的看法。

注意：1.文章必须包含表格内所有信息，可进行适当发挥；

2．词数80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

	I	Mary
Appearance	160cm，long straight hair	165cm，long curly hair
Personality	shy，friendly	outgoing，friendly
Hobby	read books，interesting，every day	read books，learn a lot，every day
	surf the Internet，relax，sometimes	traveling，open her eyes，once a year

Friendship is very important in our everyday life.Everyone has their own friends，just like Mary and I．We are good friends.

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Answer 1

【答案】Friendship is very important in our everyday life. Everyone has their own friends，just like Mary and I．We are good friends.

We have something different. She is taller and stronger than me. I have long straight hair，but Mary has long curly hair. I'm shy but she is outgoing. We are both friendly. We have some same hobbies. We both like reading. I think it's interesting，while she thinks she can learn a lot from the books. I sometimes like to surf the Internet. It makes me relax. But she likes travelling once a year，and she thinks it can open her eyes.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，内容给出的特别详细：在外貌，性格特征及爱好方面都给出了提示。在写作时根据要求首先要对自己和玛丽之间的相同及不同之处进行比较，然后就朋友之间是应该相同还是不同发表看法。

写作亮点：这篇短文在进行相同点及不同点比较时句式非常丰富，如：She is taller and stronger than me；I'm shy but she is outgoing. We both like reading.I think it's interesting，while she thinks she can learn a lot from the books.在平时的学习中要注意多记忆例句，写作中才能熟练运用。