3. 不合乎逻辑

句子的正确性还包括其应合乎逻辑,不能出现逻辑错误。例如:

China is larger than any country in Asia.

上句显然出现了逻辑错误,因为中国也属于亚洲国家之一,故应在any后加other。又如:Seeing from the top of the tower, the city looks more beautiful.

seeing显然不是the city的动作,它们之间为被动关系,故应改为过去分词seen。

文章的时态定位应视情况而定,如日记、交通事故报告等,时态定位在过去范畴,多使用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时和过去完成时。若介绍日常情况,则定在现在范畴。若讲述未来的活动安排,则定位在将来。若是今昔对比,则涉及到过去和现在,就应视情况轮换使用这两种范畴的时态。

三、文章的段落或层次

一篇好的文章还应有一定的层次感,写作时可视情况适当分段。例如:(2008年全国卷II参考范文)

June 8, 2008

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

过渡性词语好比我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂,运用得恰到好处可以起到润滑作用,从而使文章过渡自然、行文连贯;否则文章会显得生硬蹩脚、干涩无味。例如:

I get up at six. I wash my face and teeth. I have breakfast at half past six. I go to school at seven. I get to school at about twenty to eight.

这段文字读起来会让人感到干涩、乏味,且易产生疲劳感。但若适当添加一些过渡性词语,给人的感觉就会完全不同。试比较:

I get up at six. Then I wash my face and teeth. After that, I have my breakfast. I go to school at seven and get there at about twenty to eight.

再如2000年书面表达范文,若去掉过渡性词语,请同学们读读看是什么滋味。

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