摘要：2．结尾万能公式二:如此建议如果说“如此结论 是结尾最没用的废话.那么“如此建议 应该是最有价值的废话了.因为这里虽然也是废话.但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型.拽! Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典.因为考官本来经常考这个句型.而如果我们自己写出来.你说考官会怎么想呢? 更多句型: Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 二.写作的七项基本原则 As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 如此可见.长短句结合.抑扬顿挫.岂不爽哉?牢记! 强烈建议:在文章第一段用一长一短.且先长后短,在文章主体部分.要先用一个短句解释主要意思.然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式.定会让主体部分妙笔生辉!文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了. 特别提示:隐藏主体句可是要冒险的! To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly. 1)first, second, third, last 2)firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3)the first, the second, the third, the last 4)in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5)to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6)to start with, next, in addition, finally 7)first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8)most important of all, moreover, finally 9)on the one hand, on the other hand 10)for one thing, for another thing 建议:不仅仅在写作中注意.平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚! I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. I want it. 可以用短语表达:I am looking forward to it. 这样字数明显增加.表达也更准确. 五.多实少虚原则原因很简单.写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西.不要空话连篇.这就要求一定要多用实词.少用虚词.我这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词.比如我们说一个很好的时候.不应该之说nice这样空洞的词.应该使用一些诸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之类的形象词.再比如: 走出房间.general的词是:walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说:slip out of the room 小姐走出房间应该说:sail out of the room 小孩走出房间应该说:dance out of the room 老人走出房间应该说:stagger out of the room 所以多用实词.少用虚词.文章将会大放异彩! 六.多变句式原则 1)加法 都希望写下很长的句子.像个老外似的.可就是怕写错.怎么办.最保险的写长句的方法就是这些.可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后关系或者并列关系.比如说: I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar. 如果是二者并列的.我们可以用一个超级句式: Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm. 其它的短语可以用: besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover 2)转折 批评某人缺点的时候.我们总习惯先拐弯抹角说说他的优点.然后转入正题.再说缺点.这种方式虽然阴险了点.可毕竟还比较容易让人接受.所以呢.我们说话的时候.只要在要点之前先来点废话.注意二者之间用个专这次就够了. The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition. The coat was thin, but it was warm. 更多的短语: despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 3)因果 昨天在街上我看到了一个女孩.然后我主动搭讪.然后我们去咖啡厅.然后我们认识了.然后我们成为了朋友-可见.讲故事的时候我们总要追求先后顺序.先什么.后什么.所以然后这个词就变得很常见了.其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系! The snow began to fall, so we went home. 更多短语: then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that 4)失衡句(头重脚轻.或者头轻脚重) 有些人脑袋大.身体小.或者有些人脑袋小.身体大.虽然我们不希望长成这个样子.可如果真的是这样了.也就必然会吸引别人的注意力.文章中如果出现这样的句子.就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同.其实就是主语从句.表语从句.宾语从句的变形. 举例:This is what I can do. Whether he can go with us or not is not sure. 同样主语.宾语.表语可以改成如下的复杂成分: When to go, Why he goes away- 5)附加 如果有了老婆.总会遇到这样的情况.当你再讲某个人的时候.她会插一句说.我昨天见过他,或者说.就是某某某.如果把老婆的话插入到我们的话里面.那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语. The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine. I don’t enjoy that book you are reading. Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going. 其实很简单.同位语--要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成,定语从句—借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成一个句子插入其中.但是whom or that关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前. 6)排比 文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此.如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话.那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句.一个个得对偶句.一个个的不定式.一个个地词.一个个的短语.如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势! Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you. Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides. We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life. 要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可! 七.挑战极限原则既然十挑战极限.必然是比较难的.但是并非不可攀! 原理:在学生的文章中.很少发现诸如独立主格的句子.其实也很简单.只要花上5分钟的时间看看就可以领会.它就是分词的一种特殊形式.分词要求主语一致.而独立主格则不然.比如: The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills. Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China. 如果您可一些出这样的句子.不得高分才怪! In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her. 更多句型: To take-as an example, One example is-, Another exampleis-, for example 相似的比较: in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with -,- 实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字I love you! I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you. I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you. 或者上面我们举过的例子: I cannot bear it. 可以用短语表达:I cannot put up with it. 因此可以这样说:I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it. 更多短语: in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.

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