摘要:虽漏掉1.2个次重点.但覆盖所有主要内容.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确.些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致.应用简单的语句间连接成分.使全文结构紧凑.达到了预期的写作目的.第三档基本完成了试题规定的任务.虽漏掉一些内容.但覆盖所有主要内容.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误.但不影响理解.应用简单的语句间连接成分.使全文内容连贯.整体而言.基本达到了预期的写作目的.第二档未恰当完成试题规定的任务.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容.写了一些无关内容.语法结构单调.词汇项目有限.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误.影响了对写作内容的理解.较少使用语句间的连接成分.内容缺少连贯性.信息未能清楚地传达给读者.第一档未完成试题规定的任务.明显遗漏主要内容.写了一些无关内容.原因可能是未理解试题要求.语法结构单调.词汇项目有限.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误.影响对写作内容的理解.缺乏语句间的连接成分.内容不连贯.信息未能传达给读者.0分未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少.无法评判,写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清.四.说明

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The Hidden Gold

There was once a farmer who had a fine olive(橄榄树) garden. He was very hardworking, and the farm always gave so much fruit under his care. But he knew that his three sons were lazy and were eager to make wealth without hard work.

   When the farmer was old and felt his time was coming to an end, he said to his sons, "My sons, there is a pot of gold hidden in the garden. Dig for it, if you wish it."

The sons tried to get him to tell them where the gold was hidden, but he would tell them nothing more.

After the farmer was dead, the sons went to work to find the pot of gold; since they did not know where the hiding-place was, they dug the whole garden. But no pot of gold was found. The three sons were very disappointed

The next olive season, the olive trees in the garden bore more fruit than they had ever give; when it was sold, it gave the sons a whole pot of gold.

Only at this moment did they suddenly understand what the wise father had meant.

写作内容:

1. 以约30个词概括这则故事的主要内容;

2.       然后以“勤奋”为话题发表你的看法,字数大约120左右,并包括如下要点:

(1) 你赞同还是反对农夫的做法?并说出理由;

(2) 叙述你通过勤奋获得丰厚收获的一次经历,并谈谈你的感受。

写作要求:

  1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

  2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

评分标准:

    概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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阅读下面微博上的短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。  

I have know Li Yong, my friend, since my childhood and we have been studying in the same class of the same middle school, so we have been together almost every day and have built up very close friendship.

Li Yong actually used to be a good example for me to follow because be was a top student in study and got along very well with us fellow classmates. He was once responsible, active, positive and s army guy street with himself, so both teachers and classmates thought well of him. However, 3 months ago, everything changed. He often came late for class. When at class, be often did something that had mouthing to do with study. Last week, he even fought with a student of another class over a very small thing, which had a very bad influence on our class. He let us all a little bit down!

But this afternoon, when school was over, he was alone in the classroom, writing something with a knife on his desk. Coming closer to him I found carved on the desk were the words: “For my class, I must change! Action speaks louder than words.” From these words I could read his determined mind, which make me moved, while at the same time, it seemed as if the desk were crying and wanted to say something to him because of the carving.

[写作内容]

1.以约30个词概括以上博文的主要内容。

2.然后以约120个词就李勇的做法发表你的看法,内容包括:

(1)李华为何因李勇的行为而感动,并说明其理由;

(2)假如你是“课桌”,你想对李勇说什么,为什么?

(3)作为学生,你是如何为班级做出自己的贡献的?

[写作要求]

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准]

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,语篇连贯。

 

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读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

During a recent Senior Three English lesson, the teacher caught Xiao Li, a female student, busily typing messages on her cell-phone. To the teacher’s surprise, Xiao Li wasn’t just texting her friends the latest gossip. She was actually blogging about what was being taught in the classroom, sharing her opinions about the information and material with her classmates and other students.

         The case aroused a heated discussion among teachers and students city-wide. Miss Li, an English teacher from another nearby school said, “I am amazed at how creative the students can be when writing on their blogs. To me it’s a great way for students to improve their writing skills while writing about personal feelings and experiences.” But other teachers are worried that blog-addiction may interfere with their students’ study.

         A supporter and classmate of Xiao Li said, “We love her blog! We all read it each day and can’t wait to see what she writes about next. Her interesting stories and great suggestions on study really help to motivate us. And it adds a little fun to our stressful life.” Another student blogger admitted that he often works late into the night, writing his blog and responding to comments posted there. “Sometimes I don’t even have time to finish my homework. I can’t help myself. I really have a lot to say.”

 

【写作内容】

1)以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容;

2)然后以约120个词就“中学生博客”的问题进行议论,内容包括:

a)博客的利与弊;

b)你对中学生博客的态度;

c)关于此问题的建议。

【写作要求】

1)在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

 

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读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
During a recent Senior Three English lesson, the teacher caught Xiao Li, a female student, busily typing messages on her cell-phone. To the teacher’s surprise, Xiao Li wasn’t just texting her friends the latest gossip. She was actually blogging about what was being taught in the classroom, sharing her opinions about the information and material with her classmates and other students.
The case aroused a heated discussion among teachers and students city-wide. Miss Li, an English teacher from another nearby school said, “I am amazed at how creative the students can be when writing on their blogs. To me it’s a great way for students to improve their writing skills while writing about personal feelings and experiences.” But other teachers are worried that blog-addiction may interfere with their students’ study.
A supporter and classmate of Xiao Li said, “We love her blog! We all read it each day and can’t wait to see what she writes about next. Her interesting stories and great suggestions on study really help to motivate us. And it adds a little fun to our stressful life.” Another student blogger admitted that he often works late into the night, writing his blog and responding to comments posted there. “Sometimes I don’t even have time to finish my homework. I can’t help myself. I really have a lot to say.”
【写作内容】
1)以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容;
2)然后以约120个词就“中学生博客”的问题进行议论,内容包括:
a)博客的利与弊;
b)你对中学生博客的态度;
c)关于此问题的建议。
【写作要求】
1)在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

During a recent Senior Three English lesson, the teacher caught Xiao Li, a female student, busily typing messages on her cell-phone. To the teacher’s surprise, Xiao Li wasn’t just texting her friends the latest gossip. She was actually blogging about what was being taught in the classroom, sharing her opinions about the information and material with her classmates and other students.

       The case aroused a heated discussion among teachers and students city-wide. Miss Li, an English teacher from another nearby school said, “I am amazed at how creative the students can be when writing on their blogs. To me it’s a great way for students to improve their writing skills while writing about personal feelings and experiences.” But other teachers are worried that blog-addiction may interfere with their students’ study.

       A supporter and classmate of Xiao Li said, “We love her blog! We all read it each day and can’t wait to see what she writes about next. Her interesting stories and great suggestions on study really help to motivate us. And it adds a little fun to our stressful life.” Another student blogger admitted that he often works late into the night, writing his blog and responding to comments posted there. “Sometimes I don’t even have time to finish my homework. I can’t help myself. I really have a lot to say.”

【写作内容】

1)以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容;

2)然后以约120个词就“中学生博客”的问题进行议论,内容包括:

a)博客的利与弊;

b)你对中学生博客的态度;

c)关于此问题的建议。

【写作要求】

1)在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

查看习题详情和答案>>

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