摘要: 可适当增加细节.以使行文连贯.Dear Miss Green,I don’t know if you still remember me.

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After I finished  school this year, I began to look for work. Now several month later, I still

months

hadn’t found the job that I was interested ∧. Last Sunday morning I received a phone call from a

in

man calling him Mr. Smith. He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your studies. I

himself                                        did

may provide a job for you.” I entered his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I will go

beating                   would

through the job-hunting talk today and he would take me on for a lab assistant. But to my         

as

surprised, what he said was disappointed. He only needed a model.

Surprise                disappointing

One possible version:

Dear Miss Green,

I don’t know if you still remember me. I am Li Hua, the girl who used to let you down. It was your sweet smile that made me fall in love with English. Now I am a senior high school student. English is still one of my favorite subjects. When I was in junior middle school, I liked English very much, but in spite of this, my English didn’t improve a lot. Just when I was going to give it up, you had a talk with me. You said that I should continue working hard and I would be successful sooner or later. Thank you for your encouragement. Now my English is getting better and better. After graduation, I want to major in English at university.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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