摘要:21.D 题意是问老师为人怎么样.所以D最符合.

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   请根据以下的任务说明和写作要求,写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

  [任务说明]

  你要参加一场英语辩论赛,主题是“学生的学习错误该不该改正”。在参赛之前,你要查阅相关资料,并准备你的辩论发言。请认真阅读下面的短文,然后完成以下的任务。

1)概括短文的内容要点,该部分的字数大约60;

2)就“学生的学习错误该不该改正”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约90;

a) 以英语学习为例,简述你学习过程中经常出现的语言错误;

b) 你是如何看待自己的语言错误;

c) 你的老师如何对待你的语言错误;

d) 你对老师的做法持什么看法?为什么?

  [写作要求]

  你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

  [评分标准]

  概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。

  [阅读材料]

  Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others’ language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other people’s. In the same way, children learn to do all the other things. They learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teacher. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem.

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  Mrs.Thompson noticed Teddy didn’t play well with the other children, that his clothes were messy(脏乱的),and that he constantly need a bath.And Teddy could be unpleasant.

  At the school where Mrs.Thompson taught, she was required to review each child’s past records(记录)and she put Teddy’s off until last.However, when she reviewed his file, she was shocked.

  Teddy’s first grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is a bright child with a ready laugh.He does his work neatly and has good manners…”

  His second grade teacher wrote, “Teddy is an excellent student, well liked by his classmates, but he is troubled because his mother has a terminal illness…”

  His third grade teacher wrote,“His mother’s death had been hard on him…”

  Teddy’s fourth grade teacher wrote,“Teddy is withdrawn and doesn’t show much interest in school…”

  A year later, she found a note under her door, from Teddy, telling her that she was still the best teacher he ever had in his whole life.

  Several years later, she got another letter, saying that while things had been tough at times, he’d stayed in school, had stuck with it, and would soon graduate from college with the highest of honors.

  The story doesn’t end there.You see, there was yet another letter one spring.Teddy said he’d met this girl and was going to be married.He explained that his father had died a couple of years ago and he was wondering if Mrs.Thompson might agree to sit in the place at the wedding that was usually reserved for the mother of the groom(新郎).

问题导入:教师是一份富有挑战性的职业,因为他不仅向学生传授知识,还得时刻关注着学生的思想发展。对待学生不仅要因材施教,还需要无微不至的关怀与奉献,在一个人的成长过程中,教师起的作用是非常重要的,甚至是至关重要的。你认为什么样的老师才是好老师呢?请你阐述自己的观点。

A student from a college:I think, a good teacher should show passion to his students first.That is, he must be active enough in his class, thus his students will give him great responses so that he will feel his students are enthusiastic about his way of teaching.Of course this will drive him to work harder for his students, because of his passion to work and his students’ passion to his work…So I think, I would like to have a teacher who is passionate.

A young student from a city:I think a good teacher should be knowledgeable, and teach us not only his own subject, but also something else.He should also be amusing, energetic, and not be very strict.

A student:I think a good teacher should know how to encourage his students to study hard and also care his students a lot, just like a mom.Of course, at first, he should be intelligent, kind, patient and knowledgeable.

An official:I think, first of all, a good teacher should be eloquent and make his class well organized, make knowledge clear; mark and return homework quickly.Second, he should love his teaching career, meanwhile love his students and treat every one equally.

My view:________________________________

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