此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Mr. Brown ,

I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1._______

Before you came to teach us ,I had not interest in 2.______

English .My pronunciation was terribly . I could    3.______

only speak a few words .But one and a half year later. 4._______         

I now think English fun to learn .I got a lot from your  5._______

encouraging words. I will always remember what you        6._______

said, “If you try to ,you can be No. 1!” I hope you’ve 7._______

had pleasant journey home and will come to China  8._______

again sometimes in the future .I will write again  9._______

and send you the photos we take together.  10._______

Yours sincerely ,

Li Min

第II卷（非选择题，共35分）

第一节:短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

请你修改以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分

Dear sir or madam,

      I have learned from an advertisement what your company is in need for a secrelary.I’d like you consider me for the position.

 My name is Li min.I am twenty three years old.I’m studied business management in Xiamen University.I graduate this summer.I am familiar to computer operation and office software,which can help me do the office work very well.But I have learned English for ten years.In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department.My grades come out top in my department.What’s the more,I like office work very much and I too think that I can be competent for thr job.If I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative.

     Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to hear from you.

                                    Yours faithfully,

Limin