摘要: 拼写错误.应为during. 点评: 全文语言流畅.条理清楚.要点全.能使用较复杂的句式结构.文中较多地使用了短语和句型.最后得分27. 修改后作文 Dear friends, On behalf of our student touring group, I am very glad to express our thanks to our American friends. First of all, thank you for inviting us to visit your school and for your warm welcome. We all know that your school is a famous school in the states. And we are all more than fortunate to have a chance to visit it. So we strongly believe that this visit will be interesting and successful. Finally, we are willing to exchange the experience of studying with you. If you can give us some advice on how to learn English, we would appreciate it. Hope that we will have a good time together. That’s all. Thank you. 学生作文二 Dear our American friends, I’m very glad to have the honor to make this speech. First, please let me on behalf of all of us express our thanks for your invitation and warm welcome. The school is a world-famous university1, so we are lucky that we have the chance to visit it. We believe that during the visit we can get on well with each other and this visit will turn out a success. What’s more, we hope that American friends would like to help us with our English as well as something else2. Thanks to the visit, we can talk about the experience in study with American students and have a better understand3 of America. 教师批改

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