摘要:在整篇文章中.避免只使用一两个句式.要灵活运用诸如倒装句.强调句.主从复合句.分词状语等 • ①强调句 • [原文]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. • [修正]My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. • It is English and computer classes that I like best.(NMET96 书面表达参考范文片段) • 析:该句出色运用了强调句型.表达了我对英语和电脑特别喜欢的愉快之情.使文章上升了一个档次. • 感叹句可以抒发内心强烈的感情色彩.适当运用感叹句可以有效增强文章的情感性.感染性和感召性.从而震撼读者内心.引起读者共鸣. • 感叹句比较适合用于对人物或单位介绍结束后.情不自禁地对被介绍对象加以赞扬. • How time flies!(NMET98 书面表达参考范文片段) • 析:该句巧妙运用了感叹句.表达了对时间飞逝的遗憾之情. • ②由what等引导的从句.此处的what相当于中文的“所-- .有很大的概括力.如: • [原文]We had to stand there to catch the offender. • [修正]What we had to do was (to) stand there. trying to catch the offender. • What China has achieved in recent years is known through the world. • China is no longer what it used to be. • ③由with或without引导的短语.如:He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.④分词短语.如:Satisfied with the result. he decided to go on with a new experiment. • ⑤倒装句.如:Only in this way can we achieve our goal. • Never before have I seen such a wonderful film. • ⑥省略句 如:If so. victory will be ours. • You can make some changes wherever necessary. • ⑦ 对比.这是中文中也常用的方法如: • When I play.I feel excited.and after it I feel relaxed. • 8. such as列举句型是使用场合最广的句型.该句型结构精巧.对称协调.是一个难得的好句型.而且只要有强烈的使用意识.同学们在绝大多数高考中都可让其一展风采. • 不过such as句型的技术含量高.一定要稔熟其用法.such as列举句型往往用来强调人或物的个数多.需要不完全列举所有事例.该句型使用时前边先用一个总述句说明人或物的个数多.后边列举二至五个不等的并列成分.这些并列成分应短小精炼.对称协调.通常为一个词或一个短语.而不能为一个句子. • I studied quite a few subjects such as Chinese.maths.English.physics.chemistry and computer.(NMET96书面表达参考范文片段) • 析:该句用such as列举句型说明了我的学习科目很多.而且结构巧妙.对称和谐. • I can follow my own interests such as reading books.visiting museums and taking computer lessons.(NMET2001 书面表达参考范文片段) • 析:该句巧妙运用了such as列举句型.结构精巧工整.意义明确协调.堪称上乘佳句 • 9.with +名词+复合宾语句型的恰当使用也可以增加被描绘内容的生动性和趣味性.从而增强文章的感染性.该句型适合对细节性动作进行描绘. • My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind.(NMET97 书面表达参考范文片段) • 析:该句巧用了“with +名词+复合宾语 句型作伴随状语.形象地描绘了我兄弟载我骑车时的“潇洒 姿态.暗示着他这次违章载人难逃警察的干预. • 10. Such be总结句型适合使用于人物/单位介绍式书面表达的末尾对人物或单位进行总结.只要做有心人.在高考中使用该句型的可能性也是很大的. • Such be后边需接名词.名词后边需接同位语.同位语和被修饰名词之间常用逗号隔开. • Such is Sun Shuwei.a hardworking and successful diving star.(MET91 书面表达参考范文片段) • Such is our present life.a happy and colorful one.(NMET2001 书面表达参考范文片段) • 析:该句巧用了Such be总结句型.表达了减负后学校生活的重大变化.使读者对减负给学校生活带来的变化有了一个更全面.更准确的了解. • 3.通过分句和合句.增强句子的连贯性和表现力. • [原文]He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. • [修正]He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. • [原文]We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. • [修正]After a short rest. we had great fun singing and dancing.telling jokes and playing chess.

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第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.
Jade means a lot in Chinese culture and is highy valued by the Chinese people.
Many people begin to wear one when they are young till they die, believing that it
will bring them good luck.
Every time I stop to think about which possession of mine means the most to me,
I find myself looking at my left wrist, around which is a simple jade bracelet. And this bracelet will always remind me of my culture and the individual that I am.
I remember very clearly the night my parents gave me the bracelet. It was in mysophomore (二年级)  year of high school, and I had stayed out at midnight. When Ifinally got home, my parents gave me a lecture on responsibility. I expected to beplaced on restriction, but instead they gave me a jade bracelet. I was totally
shocked...but when I went to bed that night I was supremely happy.
The next morning my father told me that because they had gone shopping for the
bracelet, he had not gone to the racetrack(赛马场), and had missed out on winning
$20,000 because of me. However, he said that I was worth it.
The bracelet will always remind me of those two days and the love that exists in my relationship with my parents, even though nothing is ever said. I know that no matter what I may do, my parents will always love me and accept me the way I am.
Since I got the bracelet, I have not taken it off--mostly because I don't want to. My bracelet means so much to me that if it should ever break, I would be enormously
upset, But then. I could always save the pieces for good luck.
【写作内容】   
1.以约30个词概括这篇文章中作者收到bracelet的感受.   
2.根据短文内容就父母亲给予孩子的爱这个主题发表你的看法,至少包括以下内
容要点。该部分的字数约120个词左右。
(1)在你心目中父母亲情的重要性;   
(2)结合自己的实例来说明父母亲的爱对你的影响。  
【写作要求】
1.作文中可使用实例或其它方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但
不得直接引用原文中的句子;   
2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。   
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    第二节 读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

   阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.

    Jade means a lot in Chinese culture and is highy valued by the Chinese people.

Many people begin to wear one when they are young till they die, believing that it

will bring them good luck.

    Every time I stop to think about which possession of mine means the most to me,

I find myself looking at my left wrist, around which is a simple jade bracelet. And this bracelet will always remind me of my culture and the individual that I am.

   I remember very clearly the night my parents gave me the bracelet. It was in mysophomore (二年级)  year of high school, and I had stayed out at midnight. When Ifinally got home, my parents gave me a lecture on responsibility. I expected to beplaced on restriction, but instead they gave me a jade bracelet. I was totally

shocked...but when I went to bed that night I was supremely happy.

    The next morning my father told me that because they had gone shopping for the

bracelet, he had not gone to the racetrack(赛马场), and had missed out on winning

$20,000 because of me. However, he said that I was worth it.

    The bracelet will always remind me of those two days and the love that exists in my relationship with my parents, even though nothing is ever said. I know that no matter what I may do, my parents will always love me and accept me the way I am.

Since I got the bracelet, I have not taken it off--mostly because I don't want to. My bracelet means so much to me that if it should ever break, I would be enormously

upset, But then. I could always save the pieces for good luck.

【写作内容】   

1.以约30个词概括这篇文章中作者收到bracelet的感受.   

2.根据短文内容就父母亲给予孩子的爱这个主题发表你的看法,至少包括以下内

容要点。该部分的字数约120个词左右。

(1)在你心目中父母亲情的重要性;   

(2)结合自己的实例来说明父母亲的爱对你的影响。  

【写作要求】

1.作文中可使用实例或其它方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但

不得直接引用原文中的句子;    

2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。   

_____________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________

 

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    第二节 读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)

   阅读下面短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文.

    Jade means a lot in Chinese culture and is highy valued by the Chinese people.

Many people begin to wear one when they are young till they die, believing that it

will bring them good luck.

    Every time I stop to think about which possession of mine means the most to me,

I find myself looking at my left wrist, around which is a simple jade bracelet. And this bracelet will always remind me of my culture and the individual that I am.

   I remember very clearly the night my parents gave me the bracelet. It was in mysophomore (二年级)  year of high school, and I had stayed out at midnight. When Ifinally got home, my parents gave me a lecture on responsibility. I expected to beplaced on restriction, but instead they gave me a jade bracelet. I was totally

shocked...but when I went to bed that night I was supremely happy.

    The next morning my father told me that because they had gone shopping for the

bracelet, he had not gone to the racetrack(赛马场), and had missed out on winning

$20,000 because of me. However, he said that I was worth it.

    The bracelet will always remind me of those two days and the love that exists in my relationship with my parents, even though nothing is ever said. I know that no matter what I may do, my parents will always love me and accept me the way I am.

Since I got the bracelet, I have not taken it off--mostly because I don't want to. My bracelet means so much to me that if it should ever break, I would be enormously

upset, But then. I could always save the pieces for good luck.

【写作内容】   

1.以约30个词概括这篇文章中作者收到bracelet的感受.   

2.根据短文内容就父母亲给予孩子的爱这个主题发表你的看法,至少包括以下内

容要点。该部分的字数约120个词左右。

(1)在你心目中父母亲情的重要性;   

(2)结合自己的实例来说明父母亲的爱对你的影响。  

【写作要求】

1.作文中可使用实例或其它方法支持你的观点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但

不得直接引用原文中的句子;   

2.文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。   

_____________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________

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书面表达
        假设你在一封电子邮件中看到你的一位四川笔友写的一篇关于灾区新貌的文章,有些语句他不能够很好地用英语来表达,特向你求助.请按照要求帮助你的笔友完成这篇文章。
要求:有效使用所复习过的语言知识(词汇,短语,句式)和语法知识(时态,语态,从句),使表达通顺连贯。
                                                                      Great Changes
   ___________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________在过去的三年里我的学校所发生的巨大变化给我留下了深刻的印象。(请使用定语从句.)
   On May 12, 2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving
badly-damaged buildings. _____________________________________________________可是
现在却呈现出新的面貌。Tall buildings have been put up, including classrooms and laboratory
buildings, and a library. There is also a newly-built standard playground. ___________________
________________________________________________________________________在新的
环境中,师生愉快地工作和学习。_______________________________________________
________________________________________________________曾经的废墟(once-ruined
place) 如今已经变成一座美丽而充满生机的学校,这真令人惊奇。(请使用名词性从句。)
   Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. ______
________________________________________________是爱心和关注带来的这巨大的变化。(请使用强调句式。)Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family,
caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.
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