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阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
As we all know, computers are playing an importantpart in our daily life．Much information can be stored in them．We can also know what has lately happened in the world on the Internet．In the past, people had to do lots of work which was very dangerous．Now, however, computers can do it instead．Besides, computers are also helpful in our English learning．But if we are spending too much time playing computer games, it will influence our study．So we should make good use of the computer．
写作内容：
1．概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约60词左右。
2．随着社会的发展，电脑在人们日常生活中的作用越来越大。电脑能够储存信息，上网；这使得人们的生活更加方便快捷；但是游戏、色情等负面影响也极大地危害了青少年的成长和发展。请你就家长是否应该为孩子们买电脑这一话题，向编辑部写一封信，发表一下自己的看法。
写作要求：
你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。
评分标准：
概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。
短文改错
文中共有
10处错误，每句中最多有两处。增加
：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除
：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改
：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2．
只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。As the development of the Internet, the net bar plays an important role on people's life．More and more students like to go to net bars．They were absorbed in playing games, or make friends．Some often go on to playing late into the night in the net bar．As a result, not only it do harm to their healthy but also it has a bad effect on their studies．Luckily, many parents have realized it．Recently, six thousands students have guaranteed they will be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province．This is necessary for the students to get rid off the bad habit．
下面短文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like take the chance for the Two-week Eco-travel Round Australia. I’m a senior two student of 17 in Xi’an. I have a great many of hobbies, such as music, drawing or playing chess. Especially I’m fond of sports and travel. That’s because I’m quite strong and healthy. Australia has long been my dream countries to visit. There’re plenty of interesting plants and animals in that magic country, which were what I want to learn personal. The travel will for sure help increase my knowledge of protect the environment and broaden your horizons. It maybe very tired, but I still apply for the travel.
Yours Li Hua
查看习题详情和答案>>假定你是李平，一家英文报社邀清你调查一下中学生使用网络的情况，并依据调查写一篇报道。请根据下面提供的信息对调查结果作简要介绍，然后发给报社。
主要用途：
1．阅读国内外新闻，学习外语；
2．欣赏音乐、看电影、玩游戏、发e-mails等；
3．网上购物。
存在问题：
1．花过多时间在网上玩游戏，浪费时间，影响学业；2．浏览不良信息，对身心有害。
注意：
1．词数：100左右
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3．文章开头已给出，但不计人总词数
As we all know，the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life……
查看习题详情和答案>>短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
My classmate Liu Hong is an warm-hearted girl．She is good at studying, dancing and playing piano．After hear Sichuan earthquake, she felt very sad about it．She decided to do something to helping Sichuan people．First she calls her friends up and came up with having a benefit show．Then she handed out advertisement with her friends or put up signs asking people to watch．Luckily she did very good．A lot of people were moved and gave their hands to the Sichuan people．At last, she raised 5,000 yuan．She gave up all the money to the quake-hit areas．