摘要： ---- What do you think of the furniture on exhibition? --- Well, great! But I don't think much of you bought. A. the one B. it C. that D. which --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 学生英语作文点评一则 提示: 上周六. 张华去河里游泳.回来途中淋了雨.晚上头疼得厉害.妈妈带他去看医生.医生说他得了重感冒.叫他卧床休息三天.因此今天不能到学校上课.也不能参加周二的 篮球赛.请你以张华的名义写病假条向老师请假. 字数:100词左右. 学生习作: Dear Mr. Liu, I’m writing to you to ask for sick leave. Last Saturday I went to swim in the river and I was caught by a rain-shower on the way to home. That night I felt headache. My mother gave me a temperature and found I had a heavy fever. She took me to see a doctor the next day. The doctor said I had a bad cold and asked me to lie in the bed for three days .So I can’t come to school today and I can’t attend the basketball match to be held on Tuesday, too. Yours, Zhang Hua 总评: 本篇作文格式正确.要点表达齐全.行文比较连贯.意思表达基本清楚.尤其开篇好. 一句话即点明了主题. 但文中有10 处错误.请改正. KEY: 1-5 CCCCA 6-10 BAACA 11-15 DAACA 16-18 BDC Dear Mr. Liu, I’m writing to you to ask for sick leave. Last Saturday I went swimming in the river and I was caught in a rain-shower on the way home. That night I had a headache. My mother took my a temperature and found I had a high fever. She took me to see a doctor the next day . The doctor said I had a bad cold and asked me to stay in bed for three days .So I can’t go to school today and I can’t take part in the basketball match to be held on Tuesday, either. Yours, Zhang Hua AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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