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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。

Many years ago, I was travelling in the northwest of Indian. One evening, after hunting in the

                                           

forest all day, I was returning alone to the place which I had put up my tent. It was growing dark

                                       

but I was walking along a narrow path. On my right was a wide river, and on my left , thick dark

                                                                

forest. Suddenly, I saw two eyes looking at me from among the trees. A tiger was about to jump

on me. What should I do? Should I jump into the river and hoped to save my life by swimming?

                                             

I looked to the right. In the river there was a huge crocodile waited to welcome me with its

                                               

mouth widely open. I was so frightened that I closed my eyes. When I opened it, what do you

                                         

think was happened? The tiger had jumped right over me and was now in the mouth of the

  

crocodile. Believe or not!

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