假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tony,
Thank you for your letter. To tell you the truth, I’ve thought a lot of about whether you
should buy a laptop computer help you with your study. In my opinion, you’d better not. For
one reason, it’s very easy for you to develop some bad habit once you have it, such as playing
computer games, see movies and so on, which will be a waste of time. For other reason, buying a
laptop computer don’t mean you can study well. If you want to make a progress, you need to put
your heart into your study but work hard. Whether you had a computer or not is not the most
important. Do you agree to me? Looking forward to your reply!
Li Hua

该句多一个词：把余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该句右边横线上写出该词

并也用斜线划掉。该句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该句右边横线上写出该

加的词。该句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。

It is a pleasure for me to write this letter to tell how much              __ ___

I enjoyed my stay in your whole family last week. This was my        __ ___

first visit an English family. At first, I was worried about my           __ ___  

poor English. And when I saw your wife and children waiting for        __ ___

me with warm smile of welcome on their faces. I immediately knew       __ ___ 

that everything would be all right. There are many more happy           ___

memories of the week that I will keep with me forever. I particularly      ___ 

enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the            _ ___

changing colors of the leaves on the trees. I also like the                _ ___

fishing trip. It was such much fun.                                                        __

第II卷（选择题，共50分）

第三部分：写作（共两节，满分50分）

第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画上一个勾“√”；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线“\”划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线“\”划掉；此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号“∧”，在该行右边横线上写上该加的词；此行错一个词，在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Der Jenny,

Thank you inviting me to holiday with you . I           66．___________

would have glad accepted your invitation, but            67．___________

now I am afraid I can’t. Yesterday I received a letter     68．___________

from my parents in which he said they hadn’t seen me     69．___________

for long and hope therefore I could be back at home for  70．___________

a while. I hope you can understand this. I have long       71．___________

absent from home but sometimes I felt lonely. I believe         72．___________

you have the same experience either. Thank you and, most  73．___________

important, don’t forget to let me to know and take me along      74．___________

when in future days you are to seeing some good movies,   75．___________

and go picnicking. May you have a happy holiday!    

Yours,

Wang Fang

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾（√ ）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉；在该行右边横线上写上该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），在该行右边的横线上写上该加的词。

此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

I was a honest child indeed. I didn’t dare to tell lies.                      

because of my eyes often let the secret out. I remembered                  

telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on                

my father’s face, to let alone my mother’s eyes. I glanced                

here and there, up and down, nervously.                                        

       However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to                       

worry my nervous eyes because everything I wanted to say                

was sent by letter. I found myself often tell small lies. I wrote              

“I’m well in Beijing. I enjoy the food selling at the university.              

And at the weekends, I often buy fried chickens or pork to eat.”