假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你脾你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'm a middle school student name Li Ming．I'm writing to tell you something． Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school．I went there too in the other day．I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat．Some students are even talking about love affairs online．On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations．The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games．The Internet is good if we make good use of them．Otherwise, it will do us great harm．So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively．

Dear sir，

I’m a middle school student and I’m in trouble．        1. ______________

I was used to1ike English，but now I have some          2．_____________

difficulties in English，especially in writing．Though I    3．_____________

know English is a very important subject，but I think now  4．_____________

it’s too difficult for me．You know I have got poorly       5. _____________

results in English many times because my writing was      6．_____________

Poor. I wonder why such many students like English and    7．_____________

can get good results. I want be one of the best             8．_____________

student and go to a famous university after graduation．    9．_____________

But my English is not good enough．What should he do?   10．____________

  Matches made over the Internet often do not last long because people end up choosing unsuitable

partners and forming emotional bonds before meeting face-to-face, an Australian university researcher

has found.

  Women may especially find Mr. Wrong, as they tend to be attracted by fine comments or clever

emails, said psychologist Matthew Bambling from the Queensland University of Technology.

  “You can never assume things are the way they seem online,” Bambling said. “The fact that they

can write a clever comment or a witty email doesn’t mean they will be Mr. Right, that’s for sure,” he

said, adding some men use the concept of “netting”, sending emails to dozens of women and hoping

one might respond. Bambling said you can find a partner online, but warned those using the Web to

find love to be aware of the traps. “There’s definitely an uncontrolled effect online,” he said, with

people more likely to exaggerate their good points while hiding anything negative. “Few guys for

example would say ‘look, I’m a middle aged alcoholic who’s been married five times, pick me’.

They’re going to present themselves as a good catch.” He said it was easy for people to quickly invest

too much emotionally in an online relationship because they don’t see the full picture of the person

they are emailing.

  Bambling said people can avoid many of the problems by meeting early in the actual relationship,

rather than by getting to know each other only by email. He suggests couples arrange to meet over

coffee after a few emails, which will help people from building up a fantasy image of their match.

“The main thing to remember is to make real life contact as soon as possible if you are interested in

someone, because then you will know contact as soon as possible if you are interested in someone,

because then you will know if a relationship is a possibility.” He said.

1. Why were women quite likely to find Mr. Wrong over the Internet?

   A. Because they often judge a person by his appearance.

   B. Because single women usually felt more lonely.

   C. Because the emotional bonds were hard to break.

   D. Because they were easily attracted by fine comments.

2. About the online relationship Bambling suggests we should be ______.

   A. rejective    B. favorable      C. cautious      D. hopeful

3. The underlined word “exaggerate” in Paragraph 3 probably means “______”.

   A. enlarge     B. invent         C. remove       D. cover

4. What is suggested by Bambling for a better online relationship?

   A. Writing clever comments or emails to girls frequently.

   B. Finding a partner online through one night respond.

   C. Making real life contact before further development.

   D. Investing much emotion in your partner.

第三节  书面表达（满分30分）

假如你是一名中学生，叫李华，请根据下表内容用英语写信给某报社Just ask栏目的主持人Ralph。请求帮助解决一个长期困扰你的问题。

你的情况：           1、学习成绩好。                2、爱母亲。                3、有点害怕母亲。

你母亲的情况：    1. 很少有时间和你说话。   2、对你很严，易发脾气。

你的问题：           1、很少交流。                   2、希望互相了解。     3、不知如何沟通。

注意：词数100左右；参考词汇：发脾气lose one's temper

Dear Ralph,

I'm a middle school student. ____________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________.

　  I do hope we’ll be closer. What can I do?

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours sincerely, 

Li Hua

 My topic today is the Internet. It was prompted(引出)by the first letter, which I am unable to answer fully for the reasons given!

Dear David,

I’m a middle school student. Now I am preparing for a writing competition. Could you please check the mistakes in my article about using the Internet and

Give me some advice?                           No name                                                                               David writes: I’m very sorry to say that I think it would be very unfair for me to help you win a competition--- unfair to the other competitors!

But I’ll say that your article is very interesting and I wish you good luck.

Dear David,

     I’m now learning English by myself. Can you introduce some useful websites where I can make friends with foreigners? Please help me.

Moonlight

David writes: Well, dear moonlight, I think you made a good choice by using the Net in your self-studies. Two very good websites I’d suggest to you are:

www.britishcouncil.org.cn and www.britishcouncil.org.cn/learn.

     By the way, for those readers interested in the teaching of English, there is an Internet discussion group called ELTCSChi-L (English Language Teaching Contacts Scheme China List).

     And also, a healthy warning to all my readers: If over-used, the Internet can be a WOMBAT—A Waste of Money, Brains and Time!

1. David is probably a ________.

   A. language expert        B. computer expert    

C. college student         D. club chairman

2.  What is the reason why the first letter is unable to be fully answered?

A. David is unable to think out good advice.

B. David thinks it is expected to play fair in the competition.

C. David is going to talk on another topic-Internet.

D. David finds no mistakes in that article.

3.“www.britishcouncil.org.cn” is a (an)________.

A. English newspaper for students and language teachers.

B. website where one can join a discussion group.

C. newspaper column for answering readers’ questions .

D. website where one can make foreign friends.