摘要： 文章的不足之处在于: (1)有些部分不够连贯.如第一段中最后既没有给出衔接上下文的句子,也没有明确提出问题,第二段开篇直接论述自己的观点显得有些突兀. (2)文章主体部分在论述自己的观点时,条理性还有待提高.如第二部分,第二点和第三点都是先提出观点,随后展开论述,第一点最好跟后面两点保持一致. (3)文中有些句子显得很突兀,如第一段中最后一句"Nobody wants to have problems with his or her parents"以及第二段中最后一句"Sometimes they may scold us and may not have the patience to listen to us, but we all know our parents love us."建议将这些句子去掉或是整合到其他部分. (4)此外,文中有些地方用词不是很恰当,如最后一句中,"best solution for"建议改成"best way of". 成稿: How to Get Along with Your Parents Nowadays, many teenagers find it hard to get along with their parents. In daily life, they may quarrel with their parents and even have a negative attitude towards their parents’ opinions. So, how can we teenagers get along well with our parents? First, I think we should spend more time with our parents and communicate with them. Different generations may have different views towards one thing, but we should not use that as an excuse to refuse to talk with our parents. Second, we should trust our parents and turn to them when we are in trouble because they are more experienced and may help us solve our problems quickly. Third, we must understand our parents better. They have a lot of pressure in their work, but they still have to spend time taking care of us. The most important thing for us to remember is that our parents love us deeply, so it should not be so difficult for us to understand and communicate with each other. Powerful sentences:

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V基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
[写作内容]
请根据以下情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。
情景说明：
下表是对某学校食堂服务调查情况：
学校食堂的优点：食堂干净；饭菜可口；服务态度好。
学校食堂的不足之处：价格偏高；种类偏少；等候时间较长。
建议：尽快解决问题。
假设你是李华，请就本食堂服务（canteen service）的状况给校长写一封信，反映以上问题。
[写作要求]
必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给内容；
将5个句子组织成连贯的短文；
信的开头结尾已经给出，不包括在五个句子内。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Mr.Principal，
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua

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假如你在学校举行的英语演讲比赛中获得了好成绩，将在颁奖仪式上发言，请用英语写一篇发言稿，要点如下：

参赛目标是否实现

取得好成绩的两点主要原因

演讲中发现的自己的不足之处及改进办法

注意：1.字数120左右

     2．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Good afternoon,everyone!

     It is an honour for me to speak here.

                                                                                       

                                                                                        

                                                                                       

                                                                                       

Thank you !

 

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V基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

[写作内容]

请根据以下情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。

情景说明：

下表是对某学校食堂服务调查情况：

学校食堂的优点：食堂干净；饭菜可口；服务态度好。

学校食堂的不足之处：价格偏高；种类偏少；等候时间较长。

建议：尽快解决问题。

假设你是李华，请就本食堂服务（canteen service）的状况给校长写一封信，反映以上问题。

 [写作要求]

必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给内容；

将5个句子组织成连贯的短文；

信的开头结尾已经给出，不包括在五个句子内。

 [评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Dear Mr.Principal，

                                                                                

                                                                                 

                                                               

        Thanks for your consideration.

                                                          Sincerely yours,

                                                          Li Hua

 

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第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

 Liu Feng    Blog              My 18th Birthday      2010- 4-14 9:29:2

Today is my 18th birthday, which means that from now on, I am an adult, so it is very fresh to me. I can not forget the happiness and love that my family and friends have given me. To show their love and affection, they held a great ceremony for me at home, and also sent me many kinds of presents, which have left me with great memories.

However, the most unforgettable thing is : a small gift from my English teacher, Jesse.

This morning, after class, Jesse approached me and said “Happy Birthday and here is a card for you”. After thanking him, I carefully opened it:

“Dear Liu Feng,

I sincerely hope the 18th birthday will bring you great happiness all through your life. I have been with you for almost one year, and I find you are a good boy. You are working hard and doing fine in your study, and also I’d like you to have a little change in yourself. Since last month, when you failed in the exam, you have become shy and passive, you seem to have closed your world from others and hesitate to be together with them, which I think is not good for you. To adapt yourself to your future college and social life, find yourself an active life！

Yours,

Jesse”

Reading this, I was moved to tears…

 

[写作内容]

以上是你的好友刘风在他的Blog里记录他十八岁生日那天所发生的事, 现在请你依据他Blog里的内容发表你的看法：

1．以约30个词概括Blog的内容；

2．以约120个词发表你的的看法，并包括如下要点：

（1）简要评价英语老师的做法；

（2）依据英语老师指出刘风的不足之处，请你任选一点提出改进的建议；

（3）说明其必要性；

（4）表达你对他的希望。

[写作要求]

1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．写作内容中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

 

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读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

： Liu Feng    Blog                          My 18th Birthday      2010- 4-14 9:29:2

Today is my 18th birthday, which means that from now on, I am an adult, so it is very fresh to me. I can not forget the happiness and love that my family and friends have given me. To show their love and affection, they held a great ceremony for me at home, and also sent me many kinds of presents, which have left me with great memories.

However, the most unforgettable thing is : a small gift from my English teacher, Jesse.

This morning, after class, Jesse approached me and said “Happy Birthday and here is a card for you”. After thanking him, I carefully opened it:

“Dear Liu Feng,

I sincerely hope the 18th birthday will bring you great happiness all through your life. I have been with you for almost one year, and I find you are a good boy. You are working hard and doing fine in your study, and also I’d like you to have a little change in yourself. Since last month, when you failed in the exam, you have become shy and passive, you seem to have closed your world from others and hesitate to be together with them, which I think is not good for you. To adapt yourself to your future college and social life, find yourself an active life！

Yours,

Jesse”

    

Reading this, I was moved to tears…

[写作内容]

以上是你的好友刘风在他的Blog里记录他十八岁生日那天所发生的事, 现在请你依据他Blog里的内容发表你的看法：

1．以约30个词概括Blog的内容；

2．以约120个词发表你的的看法，并包括如下要点：

（1）简要评价英语老师的做法；

（2）依据英语老师指出刘风的不足之处，请你任选一点提出改进的建议；

（3）说明其必要性；

（4）表达你对他的希望。

[写作要求]

1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．写作内容中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                            

                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                              

                                                                             

                                                                             

                                                                              

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