假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

During the past years of high school, I have had a lot of unforgettable

experience. One of them when my class prepared to a group singing competition of our

school. In order to win competition, we went all out for it. During the two weeks before

the competition, we use every chance to practice singing in our free time, and our music

teacher offered to helping us improve our singing skills. Although the job needed lots of

time and patience, but every participant took it serious and did their best. Thank to our

hard work, we won first prize. Hearing the excited news, we were all wild with joy. The

moment we got the prize, an old say hit y mind ----No pains, no gains.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Last summer I went to London for a holiday.  I spent just the week there.  While I am staying there I visited many places of interests. I also had lots of friendly talks with all kinds people.  Then I found a very interesting thing there.  One of my Chinese friends who have been lived in London told me that many English families like to buy new television sets.  There are many shops where can lend you TV sets.  The shops are often filled by a great many people.  There they can borrow a TV set very easy, and it costs them only a little.  Then it can be taken home or used for long.  

下面文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong. It was the noisiest restaurant which I had ever been to, and the food was cheap and delicious. After that,  we went to shopping for new clothes and found lots of bargain. I visited my old teacher, Mr. Smith. For my surprise, he said he didn’t find Chinese New Year very excited. He was even wearing new clothes! Because we have so many tests this week, I have to start studying hard again now. How I wish the holiday were long than ever before!

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。

Last summer I went to London for a holiday.  I spent just the week there. While I am staying there I visited many places of interests. I also had lots of friendly talks with all kind of people.  Then I found a very interesting thing there.  One of my Chinese friends who have been lived in London told me that many English families like to buy new television sets.  There are many shops where can lend you TV sets.  The shops are often filled by a great many people.  There they can borrow a TV set very easy, and it costs them only a little.  Then it can be taken home or used for long. 

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Last summer I went to London for a holiday.  I spent just the week there. While I am staying there I visited many places of interests. I also had lots of friendly talks with all kind of people.  Then I found a very interesting thing there.  One of my Chinese friends who have been lived in London told me that many English families like to buy new television sets.  There are many shops where can lend you TV sets.  The shops are often filled by a great many people.  There they can borrow a TV set very easy, and it costs them only a little.  Then it can be taken home or used for long.