假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除

或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　Dear Bob,

　　 Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country. First, let me tell you something more about myself.My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of the  China. I go to Hongqi Middle School.  We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese,English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.Do you play any ball games?  What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，高中毕业后想到美国弗吉尼亚大学(University of Virginia)计算机专业深造，请根据以下提示用英语写一封入学申请：
1．性别，年龄，毕业学校；   2．学习情况及特长；
3．申请入学的理由；        4．联系方式：lihua93@ yahoo. com
注意：1．词数：120～150；       2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
                                                                               
                                                                              
                                                                               
I look forward to your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

There once was a place  36  all the people were happy and  37 . Everyone was friendly and neighborly. Even the dogs and cats  38  together.

Then one day a stranger was seen  39  toward the village: a tall, tall stranger. As the stranger, who was a giant,  40  closer and closer, the people all ran into their houses and wouldn't come out.

The giant  41  the village. He was enormous, towering over everything.  42  a little girl stepped out on her porch. She jumped down from her porch. Her family yelled, "STOP! COME BACK! That's a giant!" But she didn't stop. She began to walk  43  the giant.

The strangest thing  44  . As the child walked toward the giant, he grew  45  . Soon he was the same size as the girl. As she came beside the giant, she  46  him. She stooped down and gently  47  the giant up in her hands, asking, "What's your name?"

The giant whispered, "My name is F-E-A-R! Help me!! I have a terrible  48  . I guess I look strange. When I meet people they are afraid of me. And when people are afraid of me, I suddenly grow into a giant and everybody runs away from me. YOU are not afraid of me, so I stayed small. Do you  49  it? It's crazy! Please help me!"

"I can take you for a walk through our village," the girl responded. "I want everyone to hear of your problem. When they know the truth, they will no  50  be afraid of you. While we are going from house to house you can look at me  51  , and then you will stay the same size as you are now.

"But  52  we go, let's change your name. What do you want to be called? YOU should not be called FEAR, because YOU are not afraid. It's the people who look at you  53  fear you. That's what causes you to grow into a giant."

"Will you hold my hand  54  ? If I get scared I'll shut my eyes. Oh, and will you please call me  55  ." 

1.                A．which          B．for which       C．when D．where

2.                A．satisfying       B．content         C．sad  D．miserable

3.                A．played         B．fighted         C．quarreled D．laughed

4.                A．walk           B．walking         C．walked   D．having walked

5.                A．coming         B．to come        C．came D．having come

6.                A．destroyed       B．came           C．pulled down   D．entered

7.                                  A．For the moment  B．All of a sudden

C．In the balance                     D．In other words

8.                A．toward         B．in             C．on   D．by

9.                A．occurred to     B．occurring       C．happened D．take place

10.                                A．bigger and bigger B．weaker and weaker

C．narrower and narrower             D．smaller and smaller

11.                                A．towered over    B．was under the shadow of

C．was afraid of                      D．fighted against

12.               A．brought        B．picked         C．set   D．put

13.               A．disaster        B．situation        C．problem   D．catastrophe

14.               A．receive        B．get            C．attain D．obtain

15.               A．more          B．longer         C．length D．much

16.               A．for a while      B．in a minute      C．all the time D．the whole day

17.               A．until           B．after           C．before    D．when

18.               A．what           B．which          C．who  D．whom

19.               A．gently          B．slightly         C．abruptly   D．delightly

20.               A．ENEMY         B．FOE           C．PAL  D．OPPONENT

A year ago, at the annual pre-Grammy party, Whitney Houston, the great star, walked on stage and closed the evening with a brilliant performance．

Last Saturday, Houston was once again the focus before the Grammy, but her presence was a regrettable one．Earlier that day, the pop music's former queen was found dead in her hotel room．She was 48．This, no doubt, is sad news to the whole music industry and her fans all over the world．

At her peak(巅峰), Houston was the golden girl of the music world．From the mid-1980s to the late 1990s, she was one of the world's best-selling artists．She impressed audiences with her effortless, powerful and peerless performance．

Besides multi-million record sales, Houston made countless hits such as The Greatest Love of All, I Have Nothing, and the mostly famous I Will Always Love You．She also influenced a generation of younger singers, from Christina Aguilera to Mariah Carey．

But by the end of her career, there was a shocking fall for this superstar．Houston had been addicted to(上瘾) drugs．Her album sales declined (下降) and the hits stopped coming and her once beautiful voice became hoarse （嘶哑的）, unable to hit the high notes as she used to．

In 2009, Houston staged a successful comeback with the album I Look To You, which fell on top of the charts．But hoarse voice, canceled concerts, and continuous illness-Houston's comeback trail wasn't smooth at all．In an interview with Oprah Winfrey in 2009, Houston admitted: "It (show business) is too much for me and I wanted out．"

Now that Houston has finally taken a break from all the chaos(混乱), may she rest in peace．

1.Whitney Houston died ______．

A．shortly before the Grammy this year         B．earlier last Sunday

C．a year ago                             D．at the annual pre-Grammy party

2.The underlined word "peerless" in Paragraph 3 most probably means ______．

A．having no power                        B．having no equal

C．requiring no effort                      D．leaving no impression

3.The cause of the fall of Whitney Houston was that _____．

A．her album sales declined

B．show business was too much for her

C．her fans no longer love her

D．she had been addicted to drugs

4.According to the passage, which is not Houston’s achievement?

A．She made countless hits such as I Have Nothing.

B．She influenced a generation of younger singers.

C．She became the focus before the Grammy this year.

D．She staged a successful comeback in 2009.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Lucy was one of my best friend at high school.
76.              
At that time, we often spend time together.
77.             
Thanks to his great help, I made much progress
78.              
of my study. Last year, she decided to study abroad.
79.              
That is to say, we would no longer see and
80.              
talk with each other for long time.
81.              
After her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best
82.              
wishes to her. She said it was the most best gift she had
83.              
ever had. From then, we’ve kept in touch with each
84.              
other through E-mails. I look forward to see her again.
85.