摘要：可根据内容要点适当增加细节.以使行文连贯. 分析:本文是一篇说明文.主要说明喜欢该运动的原因.列举其好处.并谈谈自己喜欢的明星.对比差异.加深对该运动的认识. 范文: My Favorite Sport I became interested in basketball when I was very young..Nowadays I am on the our school team.I like the sport because it is a team sport, which needs concentration (集中)and cooperation(合作). Basketball is good exercise providing me with a variety of benefits.Basketball is an excellent way tolose weigh, which helps me keep fit and healthy. Besides,basketball, as a team sport, also trains me to get along with others. In addition, playing basketball enables me to reduce stress and improve energy levels. My favorite sports star is Yaoming.As we all know, Yao is a super star in NBA now. He is famous in America not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball and in communications. Although he is very popular throughout the world, he has never forgot his country and his teachers in China. He’s the hero in my heart. Every day I practise in my free time. I will try to improve my skills and my handling of the ball. In the future, I hope to go to a sports university and perhaps be able to join the Chinese team, working with Yaoming. 点评:

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