摘要:I used to going to the countryside to draw animals 1. and plants.One day I was walking across a field, 2. looking for rabbits to draw.Losing in thought,I hadn't 3. noticed a bull to running towards me.About 100 4. metres ahead was a tree under that I would sit and 5. draw.Suddenly,I heard the noise behind me.I turned 6. and saw the bull.Knowing a bull can run more faster 7. than a man,I quickly reached the tree and climb up. 8. From there I saw the bull kicking my food bag by its 9. feet.It kept done this for 15 minutes and moved away. 10. But I was quite nervous in the tree.

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  I used to going into the countryside to draw animals and plants, on one day 1 was

walking across a field, looking for rabbits to draw. Lost in thought, I hadn't noticed

a  bull (公牛) to running towards me. About 100 metres ahead of was a tree under

which I would sit and draw. Suddenly, I heard the noise behind me. I turned and saw

the bull. I knew a bull can run more faster than a man, and I also knew that a bull

can't see very clearly and notice only shape and movement. So I ran calmly towards 

the tree, keep the tree, myself and the bull in a straight line. I also threw my bag to

the right, so it was out the line of the tree. The bull saw a sudden movement and

headed to the bag. I reached the tree and climbed up it.

 

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