Dear Lily,
I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job interview at a grocery store. I know you want to get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking for several week now and haven’t found something. The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I am you, I’d take it. If you worked there for some time, you could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you can think about get a bike later.

Dear Lily,

   I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job interview at a grocery store. I know you want to get a job at the TV station, and you’ve been looking for several week now and haven’t found something. The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly. If I am you, I’d take it. If you worked there for some time, you could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you can think about get a bike later.

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Dear Lily,

   I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job　　　　　　　　   1．　　  

interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to　　　　　　　　　　   2．　　  

get the job at a TV station, but you’ve been looking　　　　　　　　　　  3．　　  

for several week now and haven’t found anything.　　　　　　　　　　   4．　　  

The job at the grocery store doesn’t sound badly If I　　　　　　　　　　 5．　　  

am you, I’d take it. If you worked there a while, you　　　　　　　　　　 6．       

could earn some money. Its your decision, of course,　　　　　　　　　　 7．　　  

but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you　　　　　　　　　　 8．　　  

decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you　　　　　　　　　　  9．　　  

can think about get  a bike later.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　    10．　　  

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Love

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