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增加：“在 …后加…”， 如， 在and 后 加 what
删除： 写上多余的词，并用斜线划掉, 如， of 修改： …改为… ， 如，and 改为 but
注意：格式错误不给分。
2. The singer was accompanied with the piano by her sister.
3. The staff has made it clear to every passenger that they are safe and nothing will spoil their
pleasant voyage.
4. In many people’s opinion, that company, though relatively small, is pleasant to deal.
5. When we moved to France, the children adapted the change very quickly.
6. He decided to cut off cigarettes and alcohol.
7. Let’s set away our personal feelings.
8. The judge announced that the young man was innocent.
9. You can’t take her promises serious; she never keeps her word.
10. A temperate climate is benefit to the health.
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许
修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was fine on April 8, 2010．That day all the students in our class go to the suburb of our city to plant trees．On we arriving at the planting place at 8 o'clock , the teacher asked each of us to plant 5 trees at least．Then we set out digging, planting and watering．All of us were going all out finish our task, afraid of falling behind．Between us, our monitor set a good example to us．In spite of his illness, he accepted his task and finished it ahead of the time．Then he went on to help other without a little rest．After work, he was wet all over．He looked pale, and he was full of joy．Looked at the lines of young trees, we smiled pleasant, forgetting our tiredness．
第Ⅱ卷（非选择题 共35分）
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句
中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的
增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Wang Dan ,
We were having a wonderful holiday now. We haven’t seen a bear yet, but there are bear and deer in the forests around the lake where we’re staying .On our first night we saw amazing fireworks show. It doesn’t get dark here until 10 o’clock , so it was 
a real late night for us. Last night we rode in a car 2,000 meter to the top of Whistler Mountain .It was as floating in a glass ball, so peaceful and still. The city lights were beautiful. Today we went boat around the lake ,but had a very short swim .It was frozen .The weather has been sunny, but not like the weather at home .Bye for now. We will be home in
next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
At the age of ten, I went on a school trip with my class to the zoo in Beijing. We left home very earlier in the morning because they had a long journey. We travelled to Beijing by the bus and we spent the whole day at the zoo. I can remember see an elephant for the first time. I was very exciting. At midday, we eat our picnic lunch in a park near the zoo. After lunch, we visited the reptile house or saw the snakes and crocodile. At five o’clock, we got the bus and drove home. What fantastic the trip was!
第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My best friend Li Hua gives me a call this morning. 71.
She said it was her birthday and she would have a 72.
birthday party. I promised that I would go. But I went 73.
shopping this afternoon and bought a doll as his 74.
birthday present. I arrived her home at six o’clock 75.
on the evening. Many of her friends had already arrived. 76.
On the table was a big beautiful cake with 14 candle lit. 77.
Li Hua made wish and blew off all the candles. We all 78.
shouted with greatly joy. However, I didn’t see her parents. 79.
We had a great time, but I think it would be more better if 80.
we celebrate our birthdays with our parents.