南充高中为了推进“和谐校园”创建活动,对学生进行了“有烦恼向谁说”的专项调查,所获取的信息如下。假如你是我校的一名学生,请你用英语为校报写一篇短文,反映的相关情况并表达你对调查结果的看法。
词数:100左右
观 点 | 理 由 | |
17% | 不向别人说 | 不愿意和别人说自己的事或难以与人相处 |
22% | 向老师、家长说 | 阅历丰富,有生活和教育经验 |
71% | 向同学、朋友说 | 同龄人,容易相互沟通和理解 |
下面短文中有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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Dear Jacob,
Glad to hear from you. I would love to tell you something about my new invention, that can catch snakes but not harm them.
First I bought an ice-cream maker making of steel. Between the outside and the inside wall of the bowl there is some jelly, which freeze when cooled. I put the bowl into the fridge. Then in the evening I placed a frozen bowl in the snakes’ habitat and some ice cubes on top of the bowl to keep cool. Finally I covered the whole thing with a large bucket. The next morning when I removed the bucket or the bowl, I found the snakes very sleepily. I collected the passive snakes using a net and released it all back into the wild.
What do you think of my invention? Glad to hear from your advice. Thank you.
Best wishes,
Caroline