10．文中共有10处语言错误．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面——青夏教育精英家教网——

10．文中共有10处语言错误．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
Dear Peter，
I'd like to ask you to write a article for our school's English newspaper．
The"Foreign Cultures"section in our newspaper is very popular with us student．It carries articles writing by foreign friends about the cultures of his home countries．Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States？But we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spent their holidays and festivals，and the life of American high school students．You can write anything is relevant so long as it's interested and informative.400 words would be fine．By the way，I wonder if we can have your article before June 28 or not．
I'm looking forward to hearing of you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

9．Takingoptional/elective（可选择的）subjects will enrich our mind．

8．A hot cup of milk on a cold night is a realcomfort （舒适）．

7．The automatic temperature-controlling system canadjust （调节） the indoor temperature to make sure the seeds grow well．

6．I dream of standing on theplatform （讲台） in the classroom and giving lessons to lovely boys and girls．

5．He turned the corner a little too fast，narrowly（勉强地）missing the boy who ran into the road．

4．People around the world should beaware/conscious（意识到）of the real situation of water shortage．

3．Other killers are stopping the whalediving （潜水） or fleeing．

2．15percent of American children aged between 6and 18areoverweight（超重的）．

1．He made it clear with dignity that he was notresigning （辞职，退出） from active politics．

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