5．定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出——青夏教育精英家教网——

5．定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分；
3．错误类型不涉及单词拼写．

Dear Sir/Madam，
I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service．A few days ago，I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency．I found a little differences between your advertisement and action．As you say，you will provide a large air-conditioned bus，but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner．Yes，you served us lunch，and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand．We didn't enjoy any kind of shower．In fact，we only bathe in cold water．As for sightseeing，the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops，what wasted us much time．As the result，two scenery spots were finally left unseen．We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again．

4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分；
3．错误类型不涉及单词拼写．

Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning．Only with good relationships can student and teachers cooperate well．
Good relationships depended on both sides．On the one hand，students should respect teachers and our hard work．They should polite to teachers and ready to following their advice．On an other hand，teachers should be kindly，friendly and patient to students．They must be responsible on their teaching and help students．If both sides treat to each other in a friendly way，teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient．

2．Tu Youyou，who is the first female Nobel Prize winner in China，discovered a drug for malaria（疟疾），which saved millions of lives across the globe，especially in the developing world．

1．The West Lake，for which Huizhou is famous，is so beautifulthat it attracts thousands of tourists every year．

20．It is such an attractive job that more than 100applicants （apply） come to the interview．

19．Thinking something does not make your dream come true．Only by doing something can yousucceed （success）．

18．After they graduated from university，they still kept in touch with each other．

17．We should protect wild animals from being killed by the hunters．

16．Whenever I am in trouble，she is always willing to give me a hand．

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