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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear friends,

Welcome to China. I’m very pleasing to tell you some arrangement during your stay in Beijing. Our headmaster was to meet you on Monday morning and he will say anything about our school. We will be shown around the lab building and the library in the afternoon. On Tuesday morning, the students from both countries are to visit at the Forbidden City, about that Mr Zhang will tell some interesting stories. In the evening, we are going to have party in Room 402. Many students will give nice perform at the party. At 9:45 on Wednesday morning, you’ll leave to Xi’an by train.

I hope you’ll have a good time here. Thank you.

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【解析】这篇短文是写给来北京参观的学生们的,介绍他们来北京的安排。

1.本句主语是I,指人,应该用pleased修饰人,pleasing修饰事物。故把pleasing改为pleased.

2.arrangement是可数名词前面有some修饰显然应该用复数故把arrangement改为arrangements.

3.短文介绍将来的事情应该用be to do表示按照安排将要发生的事,主语是单数名词,be应该用is.故把was改为is.

4.该句表示关于我们学校的一些事”,应该用something表示一些事。anything表示任何事,不合适。故把anything改为something.

5.根据句意你们将被带领参观实验大楼和图书馆”可知,该句的人称出错,应该用you,放于句首首字母大写故把We改为You.

6.visit是及物动词后面的介词多余故删除at.

7.逗号之后是非限制性定语从句,不用that引导;当介词+关系代词引导定语从句时关系代词也不用that,此处先行词是the Forbidden City,事物,关系代词用which.故把that改为which.

8.party是可数单数名词前面要加冠词此处是泛指应不定冠词a.故加上a.

9.此处表示精彩的节目应该用名词“节目”的复数performances.故把perform改为performances.

10.因为上文提到在北京的参观,故此处表示出发去西安。leave for出发去故把to改为for.

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