题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,得知你的外国笔友Peter跟你谈论“中国梦” 个话题。她来信问你的梦想,请用英语给她写封回信。
主要内容包括:1)对梦想的理解;
2)你的人生梦想;
3)如何实现你的梦想。
注意:1)词数100左右;
2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter, I am writing to share with you my dream. Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory, which inspires me to recall my dream—to become a doctor, saving lives and shouldering the burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers. Being a motivation and goal, dreams make us determined, diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful. However, it is often the case that we are faced with a lot of difficulties on the way to success. Therefore, giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the college entrance exam is my first challenge to face consciously. Also, I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to study will contribute a lot. I am curious about yours and reply to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李华的身份给外国笔友Peter写封回信谈论“中国梦”这个话题。并告诉她你的梦想。写作要点已经给出,属于提纲类作文。注意书信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点:1.对梦想的理解;2.你的人生梦想;3.如何实现你的梦想。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。