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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

Lin Qiaozhi was a specialist in women’s disease. She lived in a generation that girl’s education was second to boy’s. It was hard work and determination which got her into medical school. What made her success later on was the kindness and consideration the showed to her patients. There is story after story of how she, tiring after a day’s work, went late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family who could not pay for her. She was said to have devoted her whole life to her patients and safe delivered about 50,000 babies. It seemed that she had been busy with her choosing career, in traveling abroad to study as well as write books and articles She also wrote a book intended for woman in the countryside. How greatly she was!

【答案】

【1】that--when

【2】which--that

【3】is--was

【4】tiring--tired

【5】去掉 for

【6】safe--safely

【7】choosing--chosen

【8】write--writing

【9】woman--women

【10】greatly--great

【解析】

试题分析:

【1】文中第二句。本句考查定语从句的连接词的选择。先行词为generation,带入从句中解释为在那个时代,担当着时间状语。故连接词不用that,而用when。句意为:她生活的那个年代,女孩的教育的重要性要次于男孩的教育。

【2】文中第三句。本句考查强调句型。强调句型基本句型为:It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+其余成分。因此本句需要把which改成that。句意为:正是她的努力学习和决心才使得她进入了医学院。

【3】文中第五句。本句考查时态。本篇文章介绍了林巧稚的一生,是已经发生了的事情。并且上下文都是一般过去时,故本句中的is要改成was。

【4】文中第五句。本句考查形容词的用法。形容词tiring和tired的区别:tiring解释为令人疲劳的;tired解释为感到疲倦的。本句句意为:关于她怎样在一天的工作后感到劳累了,却仍然工作到深夜为贫苦家庭接生的故事一个接一个。可知,本句表示她感到劳累了,故把tiring改成tired。

【5】文中第五句。考查动词用法。Pay意为付给某人钱;pay for意为替某人付款、为付钱的意思。本句句意为:那个贫苦的家庭付不起钱给她。故去掉for。

【6】文中第六句。考查副词修饰动词。本句句意为:据说她把自己的一生都献给了自己的病人并且安全地接生了大约50000孩子。修饰动词 deliver应该用副词,而不是形容词。故把safe改成safely。

【7】文中第七句。句意为:似乎她一直忙于自己所选的职业。根据句意,应该把原句中的choosing改成chosen。意为:选出来的。

【8】文中第七句。本句考查前后一致。as well as解释为和、也,它连接的词前后应该一致,因此把后面的write要改成writing,和前面的travelling保持一致。句意为:忙于去国外学习和写书写文章。

【9】文中倒数第二句。句意为:她还为农村女性们写了一本书。此时是指广大农村女性,不是指一个,故把原句中的woman改成women。

【10】文中倒数第一句。句意为:她是多么伟大啊!本句考查形容词担当表语,故把原句中的greatly改成great。

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