Question

17．下面这篇短文共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划-横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
    注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
A health diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children．Take Li Ming as example．Li Ming used to being a healthy boy，but over a year ago，He got into a bad habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．Besides，he spends  a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did few exercise．As a result，she  put on so much weight that he found difficult to climb the stairs．But Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have a balancing healthy diet．He also took an activie part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and play basketball．Months late，Li Ming became as fit as before．

Answer 1

分析 本文以Li Ming 为例告诉我们一味地吃垃圾食品和甜食，不去做运动会导致体重增加，健康的饮食和有规律的锻炼可以阻止儿童便肥胖．

解答 A health diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity among children．Take Li Ming as example．Li Ming used to being a healthy boy，but over a year ago，He got into a bad habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks．Besides，he spends  a lot of time lying on the sofa，watching TV，and did few exercise．As a result，she  put on so much weight that he found∧difficult to climb the stairs．But Li Ming decided to change the unhealthy life style．He began to have a balancing healthy diet．He also took an activie part in various sports activities such as swimming，skating，running and play basketball．Months late，Li Ming became as fit as before．
详解：
1．health改为healthy；考查形容词，此处用形容词作定语修饰名词diet．
2．as改为for；考查介词，take sth for example是固定搭配，意为"以…为例"．
3．being改为be；考查动词，used to do是固定短语，意为"过去常常…"．
4．a改为the；考查冠词，habit后面有介词短语of eating a lot of junk food and snacks限定，故用the表示特指．
5．spends改为spent；考查动词的时态，本文讲的是过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时．
6．did改为doing；考查并列结构，这里用doing与前面的lying 和watching构成并列成分，
7．she改为he；考查人称代词，根据上文的a healthy boy可知此处要用he．
8．found后面加it；考查代词，这里it在句中做形式宾语，真正的宾语为后面的不定式短语．
9．But改为So；考查连词，结合上下文分析，后面的decided to change the unhealthy life style是上文内容导致的结果，故用so表示结果．
10．balancing改为balanced；考查分词作定语，这里diet和动词balance是动宾关系，故用过去分词作定语．

点评 短文改错时首先要掌握短文的中心思想，然后根据上下文语境，分析句式结构，利用所掌握的词汇，语法等基础知识找出错误加以改正．