Question

假如你是中学生李华，你在学校食堂就餐的过程中，发现学生浪费饭菜的行为十分严重，你深感痛心和羞愧。请给校长写一封信。

1.说明写信的目的;

2.对这些行为进行批评；

3.提出切实可行的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior Three.  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Dear Mr Headmaster,

  I’m Li Hua, a student from Senior 3. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students---wasting food in the school cafeteria. Some of them throw away a little food while others waste most of them just because the food is not so delicious. As we all know, some people at home and abroad are going hungry seriously. I always feel painful and ashamed whenever I see this. It is obviously inappropriate for students to waste food .

   In order to solve the problem, some measures should be taken by our school. First, all the students are made to understand that a great number of people don’t have adequate food , which may help them realize how terrible it is for them to waste food. What’s more, I wonder if our school can set up specific regulations against such behavior. I believe that the bad habit will be got rid of soon with our joint efforts.

   I hope my suggestions will be useful.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是对学生日常生活中存在的浪费现象，所以要用一般现在时。要求让你给校长写信，因此本文必须用第一人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如draw your attention to，throw away，As we all know, going hungry，whenever， a great number of，还运用了It is adj for sb to do sth; which引导的非限制性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如： In order to，What’s more 等等。

考点：提纲作文。