Question

【题目】Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

复旦大学一研究生因平时琐事和同学不和，在寝室饮用水里投毒，导致一室友死亡。作为即将踏入大学校门的你，谈谈和同学和谐相处的重要性以及你的一些建议。

注意：1. 词数不少于120个；

2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称,

3. 文章开头已给出, 不计入字数。

A graduate of Fudan University didn’t get on well with his roommates for trivial. So he put some poison in the drinking water, killing one of his roommates. _______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

A graduate of Fudan University didn’t get on well with his roommate for trivial. He put some poison in the drinking water, killing one of his roommates. The social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college.

There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious campus life. The first thing to do is to communicate, which brings a better understanding among classmates. What’s more, you’ll have to share with each other. Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates, and your relationship will be much closer. Most important of all, you should learn to tolerate and be considerate. Only in this way can you live a happy life with your classmates in college.

In conclusion, getting along well with your classmates in college is considered greatly important. A harmonious campus life will help us have a good mood and enjoy being together. An unpleasant life will not only make your life influenced but also disturb others’.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于说明文，根据提示信息来介绍自己的看法。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。3、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，而且使用了多种句式。文章使用了定语从句he social problem has aroused great concern on how to get along with classmates among us Senior III students who are on the way to college。使用了固定句式表达Spend your time sharing your dreams and thoughts with your classmates, and your relationship will be much closer.。还使用了大量的衔接过渡词句，如: the first thing、What’s more、most important of all和In conclusion等使语言更加连贯。