题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,从小喜爱大熊猫,一直通过有关网站关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信:
1.自我介绍;
2.祝贺苏琳生日;
3.感谢工作人员;
4.索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意;1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam
Greetings from China!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings from China!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work as well as a lot of care taken by you , because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题,并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时,首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型,在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词,把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体,在发表个人观点的时候,可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be delighted to do 乐意做某事;would like to do 想要做某事;as well as 也。。;live a ..life过着。。的生活;I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child.这个句子用到现在完成时;I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work as well as a lot of care taken by you , because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US这个句子运用到because of which引导非限制性定语从句;