Question

书面表达（25分）

当前，“酒后驾车”（drinking and driving）成了人们热议的话题。请你根据以下提示对“酒后驾车”谈谈个人看法：

1．“酒后驾车”的危害。如：引发交通事故，造成交通阻塞，构成生命危险，

造成财产损失等。

2．你的建议。

注意：1．词数100词左右；   2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Possible version:

Nowadays, drinking and driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it.

As is known to us all, drinking and driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drinking and driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even death. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.

I strongly suggest effective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drinking and driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drinking and driving can be things of past.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。当前，“酒后驾车”（drinking and driving）成了人们热议的话题。请你根据以下提示对“酒后驾车”谈谈个人看法：1．“酒后驾车”的危害。如：引发交通事故，造成交通阻塞，构成生命危险，造成财产损失等。

2．你的建议。可知需要用一般现在时来写。需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法和建议。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求100字左右，写的字数不要太多，也不能太少。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。