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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front of a store window. The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags. A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes. She took the child by the hand and led him into the store. There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly clothing. They walked back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday. The little boy looked her and asked how she was God. She smiled and replied that she was just one of His child.

1.去掉the

2.has--had

3.passes--passing

4.her---him

5.warm---warmly

6.so---and

7.come---go

8.looked 后面加at

9.how---if /whether

10.child---children

【解析】

1.小题1】在商店窗户外面的前方站着,用 in front of,而in the front of表示内部的前边,去掉the。

2.小题2】通篇是过去时态,因此has—had。

3.小题3】现在分词作定语,表示主动关系,passes—passing。

4.小题4】文中讲述一个小男孩,代词性别用错,因此her---him。

5.小题5】副词修饰动词,而形容词修饰名词,clothing是名词,warm---warmly。

6.小题6】前后句是并列关系,so---and。

7.小题7】“回家”go home, come---go。

8.小题8】“看着某人”look at somebody,looked 后面加at。

9.小题9】问那个女士是否是上帝,怎样how---if /whether是否。

10.小题10】one of+复数名词,child---children。

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