Question

书面表达（满分25分）

假定你是李华，David 是你的美国笔友。他对中国鼓励使用环保购物袋很感兴趣，来信向你询问此事。请你给他写封回信。主要内容如下：

感谢他的关注。

简要介绍相关情况。

谈谈你的感想。

注意：

词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。

可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：环抱购物袋---environment-friendly shopping bag; 关注---concern.

Dear David,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

                                                                  Yours,

                                                                  Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

参考范文：

Dear David,

   I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.

As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are  to make our country an even cleaner place.

 

                                            Yours,

                                             Li Hua

【解析】今年的书面表达有三个主要方面的内容，考生可以分别写成三段，即第一段表达对美国笔友关心中国鼓励使用环保购物袋而表示感谢，这是信的开头，第二段是重点，介绍美国笔友感兴趣的问题，即中国为什么鼓励使用环保购物袋和使用情况等等，第三段表明作者自己对这一环保措施的看法。这样就成为结构完整、内容全面的一篇书面表达。

为了在书面表达中获得高分，考生要注意短文的写作逻辑合理，行文连贯，适当使用相关的过渡词或过渡句，如to begin with, next, besides, what’s more, as a result 等等。