Question

On one summer night, Henry was sleeping in his room	1._______
when suddenly he woke up and sensed that something	2._______
unusual. He looked out of the window and finding a	3.________
store nearby on the street was in fire. He immeditately	4._______
shouts at the top of his voice “Fire! Fire! Help!” He	5. _______
phoned 119 at once and then went out to put out fire.	6. _______
but it was very big a fire that he couldn’t put it out	7. _______
by himeself. Lucky enough, a lot of neighbours came out	8. _______
and soon firefighters arrived. The fire was finally put out	9. _______
and when the firefighters praised Henry his quick ation,	10. _______
he smiled, feeling very pleased.

Answer 1

1． 去掉on。在某一个夏日的夜晚表达为 one summer night，前不用介词。

2． 去掉that. that 后加一个句子。

3． finding改为found。因为与looked 并列。

4． in改为 on. be on fire 意思是“在着火”

5． shouts 改为 shouted。时态一致。

6． fire前加 the. 特指上文出现的火灾。

7． very 改为 so    意为“如此--以至于--”

8． lucky改为luckily   作状语，用副词形式

9． 正确

10． his后加for  praise sb. for意为因为某事表扬某人