题目内容
19.假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter 想来中国旅行,他写信向你了解他到北京后乘坐何种交通工具旅行比较适宜.请你给他写封回信,建议他乘坐高铁.建议理由:
1.便捷,准点;
2.舒适,安全;
3.购票方便,价格适宜.
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好.
参考词汇:中国高铁 CRH ( China Railway High-speed )
自助售票机 self-service ticket machine
Dear Peter,
I'm expecting you to come to China.
.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 高分句型
1.When you arrive in Beijing,you'd better take the CRH train,which has been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.
当你到达北京时,你最好搭乘中国高铁,中国高铁现在已经发展很成熟了,并且在中国是相当流行的.
when引导的时间状语从句,表示当…的时候,when既可以指时间点也可以指时间段.
【提示】在when引导的时间状语从句中,用一般现在时表一般将来时,用一般过去时表过去将来时,用现在完成时表将来完成时.
which引导的非限制性定语从句,作本文中先行词the CRH train的附加词,对先行词the CRH train做补充说明.
2.It has lots of different lines,so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to.
它有许多不同的线路,因此对你而言,搭乘高铁到想去的地方旅行是非常方便的.
be convenient for意为对…而言,而be convenient to意为便于…做某事,注意不要混淆.
解答 作文范文
Dear Peter,
I'm expecting you to come to China.【高分句型一】When you arrive in Beijing,you'd better take the CRH train,which has been well developed and become popular in China nowadays.【推荐交通工具-中国高铁,并说明中国高铁现状】【高分句型二】It has lots of different lines,so it is convenient for you to travel wherever you want to.The CRH trains are spacious(宽敞的),comfortable and run at the top speed of 350 km per hour.They are seldom delayed and guarantee the safety of travelers.It's easy to get tickets through many channels,such as by telephone,through the Internet,or on the self-service ticket machine.Besides,prices of tickets are reasonable.It offers first-class services to passengers and I am sure you will enjoy a good journey.【说明高铁优点,并以肯定的语气使自己的话更加可信】
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 考生在写作时,充分利用提纲写出主题句,并围绕主题句进行扩展,使自己的建议更为可信,过渡词及形式主语的使用熟练,行文连贯.
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