Question

【题目】书面表达

下列表格为某市2005年与2015年人们度假方式的情况比较，请按表格内容写一篇120词左右的短文，并对度假方式变化原因加以简要评析。

年度	2005	2015	原因
境外旅游	11%	22%	收入增加
海边度假	38%	31%	海水污染
爬山野营	11%	34%	回归自然

注意：1.词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015.

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Answer 1

【答案】One possible version

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015.

The table shows that a greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2015. The rate of 2015 (22%) doubled that of 2005 (11%). We are sure that the number will increase because with their incomes rising, more people can afford the journeys abroad.

At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of people. However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2005 to 31% in 2015, the reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted. The polluted seaside is likely to drive more visitors away.

The year 2015 saw a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The rate in 2015 (34%) was more than three times that in 2005 (11%). The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于图表类写作。这是一篇图表作文，本文的关键之一就要注意百分数的表达法。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。

亮点说明：范文中高级句式的运用很到位，如定语从句The reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted.表语从句The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to nature.倍数表达：The rate in 2015 (34%) was more than three times that in 2005 (11%).在写作时，运用正确的高级句式可以给文章增色很多。