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基础型写作

请根据以下内容说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。

写作内容说明：

一次难忘的经历：

1．放学了；

2．发现爸爸病倒在床上；

3．我决定自己试着做饭；

4．饭煮焦了；

5．爸爸没有批评我反而表扬了我。

写作要求：

1．标题：An unforgettable experience；

2．必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容；

3．用5个句子来表述以上所有的内容，注意要点之间要连贯和文章的完整性。

答案：
解析：

　　①范文赏读：An unforgettable experience

　　After school, I went home happily．When I got home, I found Father was lying in bed and was ill．I must take care of him, so I decided to try cooking by myself．I did the cooking with great difficulty, but the food got burnt in the end．To my delight, Father did not blame me, instead he praise me for the meal I cooked．

　　②思路导航：这是一篇记叙文，主要考查学生的对句法的掌握和谋篇布局的能力。同学们只要抓住给出的要点，掌握其中的短语和句型，加上适当的连贯词，并要注意情节的自然过度，合理地组织语言。

　　③亮点点击：

　　1．本文考查了以下几个短语：

find…doing; decide to do sth; try doing sth; to one’s delight; praise sb for sth．

　　学生还可以灵活使用不同短语来表达：如decide to do sth＝determine to do sth/be determined to do sth/make a decision to do sth; to one’s delight＝to one’s joy 等等！

　　2．文章的第二句运用了一定的复合结构和短语结构，使文章的情节显得更明朗。

　　3．文章还使用了恰当的连贯词，使文章更加严密：如：and; so; but; To my delight, instead等！


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