Question

4．假设你是李华，你期中考试英语成绩不理想，打算今后用功学习．请根据以下要点，发送一份Email给你的笔友Jenny，谈谈你今后的英语学习计划．
要点：
（1）成绩不好的原因（至少三点）．
（2）今后英语学习的打算：（1）请教老师同学；（2）提高听课效率；（3）及时完成作业；（4）…
注意：（1）信的内容应包括所有要点，可适当发挥或增加细节；
（2）词数120左右（信的格式及开头已写好，不记入总词数）．
Dear Jenny
I'm sorry to tell you that I did poorly in English MidTerm Examination．Here are the reasons．A lack of hard work at English is the first point．Besides，the wrong belief in English learning is what led to failure．I have held a point that to learn English is to remember English words and phrases．What's most terrible is that I spend little time in comprehension reading．To improve English，I have made a new learning plan，hoping to make progress in English．From now on，I will turn to my English teacher and classmates for help if I come across some problems．At the same time，I will listen attentively in class and take notes in time when necessary．In addition，I will finish the assignments after timely revision every day．Above all，I will adopt correct learning strategies and work harder than before．
What do you think of my plan？
Your Faithfully
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于考试失利的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，用一般现在时态分析成绩不好的原因；用一般将来时表达今后英语学习的打算，文章也主要包括这两部分．
高分句型：
1．Besides，the wrong belief in English learning is what led to failure．句子里the wrong belief in English learning 是主语；what led to failure是表语从句，表示"导致失败的原因"．
此外对英语学习错误的观念是导致失败的原因．
2．To improve English，I have made a new learning plan，hoping to make progress in English．句子里To improve English是动词不定式做目的状语；hoping to make progress in English是伴随状语，和主语I之间是主动关系．
为了提高英语成绩，我制定了几个学习计划，希望能够取得进步．

解答 Dear Jenny，
I'm sorry to tell you that I did poorly in English Mid-Term Examination．Here are the reasons．A lack of hard work at English is the first point．Besides，the wrong belief in English learning is what led to failure．【高分句型二】I have held a point that to learn English is to remember English words and phrases．What's most terrible is that I spend little time in comprehension reading．（分析成绩不好的原因）
 To improve English，I have made a new learning plan，hoping to make progress in English．【高分句型二】From now on，I will turn to my English teacher and classmates for help if I come across some problems．At the same time，I will listen attentively in class and take notes in time when necessary．In addition，I will finish the assignments after timely revision every day．Above all，I will adopt correct learning strategies and work harder than before．（今后英语学习的打算）
What do you think of my plan？I am looking forward your letter．
                                                                                                                                 Your Faithfully
                                                                                                                                       LiHua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
提纲类作文一般给出的要点比较多，这就要求在写作时不能有遗漏，无论是汉语还是英文的提示，都要在作文里体现出来，考生对此一定要重视．