Question

【题目】假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友Jill Robbins写一封信，向她请求保持健康方面的建议。信的内容包括：

1.健康的重要性；

2.好习惯；

3.不良习惯。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jill Robbins,

How are you recently?I'm writing to ask for advice about health.Everyone knows the importance of health,so do I.I’d like to know what you do to keep healthy.Please tell me what I should do.For example,what good habits I should form,how I can build up my body,how I can have a balanced diet and so on.

On the contrary,I want to know what I should avoid doing,and what you do to avoid bad living habits.I wish that I had your strong body!

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一片提纲类作文。考生在成文时应注意：合理发挥想象力，使文章的表达自然，丰满。文章的写作要点要齐全。注意文章的人称：以第一人称为主。时态：一般现在时。注意使用高级词汇和句型，以提高文章的档次；恰当使用一些连词、插入语，使文章表达自然，流畅。根据提示信息可判断出，本文属于应用文中的邮件。邮件格式已经给出。

【范文亮点】

宾语从句。I’d like to know what you do to keep healthy。

Please tell me what I should do.

I want to know what I should avoid doing,and what you do to avoid bad living habits.

I wish that I had your strong body!

On the contrary的使用，使文章衔接更好。